svn commit: r51342 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs
Eitan Adler
eadler at FreeBSD.org
Wed Dec 27 11:32:13 UTC 2017
Author: eadler
Date: Wed Dec 27 11:32:11 2017
New Revision: 51342
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51342
Log:
Front Page: wordsmith the description a bit
Remove "advanced" which tells the user nothing, and is repeated later.
Remove "computer" in front of "operating system" which is a given.
"Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when
there is nothing left to take away"
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl Wed Dec 27 11:22:49 2017 (r51341)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl Wed Dec 27 11:32:11 2017 (r51342)
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
<div id="frontfeaturecontent">
<h1>The &os; Project</h1>
- <p>&os; is an advanced computer
+ <p>&os; is an
operating system used to power
modern servers, desktops, and
embedded
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