svn commit: r51330 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs: ipv6 multimedia portmgr

[Eitan Adler]

On 22 December 2017 at 20:24, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk at mit.edu> wrote:
> On Fri, Dec 22, 2017 at 05:48:44PM +0000, Eitan Adler wrote:
>> Author: eadler
>> Date: Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017
>> New Revision: 51330
>> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51330
>>
>> Log:
>>   multiple: fix a few typos
>>
>>   - Duplicate words
>>   - change -> chance
>>   - insure -> ensure (this is actually an Americanism, but can confuse
>>     some people)
>>
>> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml
>> ==============================================================================
>> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml       Fri Dec 22 14:48:00 2017        (r51329)
>> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml       Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017        (r51330)
>> @@ -13072,7 +13072,7 @@
>>               on the system. One of the first problems presented
>>               to the person who wants to tune the scheduler is
>>               how to measure the effects of their changes. Simply
>> -             tweaking the parameters and hoping that that will
>> +             tweaking the parameters and hoping that will
>
> This "that that" was correct.  I am travelling; can you fix it?

I read this a few times. Switched to
- tweaking the parameters and hoping that will
+ tweaking the parameters and hoping that the tweaks will


A fun sentence for you: Tim where Jim had had "had had" had had "had";
"had had" had had a better effect on the teacher.


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Eitan Adler
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