svn commit: r50139 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction
Brad Davis
brd at FreeBSD.org
Sun Apr 9 00:48:26 UTC 2017
Author: brd
Date: Sun Apr 9 00:48:24 2017
New Revision: 50139
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50139
Log:
Fix some grammer and a missing apostrophe.
PR: 218069
Submitted by: Daniel Petti <djpetti at me.com>
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml Sun Apr 9 00:38:58 2017 (r50138)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml Sun Apr 9 00:48:24 2017 (r50139)
@@ -614,7 +614,7 @@
</indexterm> - Stormshield Network Security appliances
are based on a hardened version of &os;. The BSD license
- allows us to integrate our own intellectual property with
+ allows them to integrate their own intellectual property with
the system while returning a great deal of interesting
development to the community.</para>
</listitem>
@@ -626,7 +626,7 @@
<primary>The Weather Channel</primary>
</indexterm> - The IntelliStar appliance that is installed
- at each local cable providers headend and is responsible
+ at each local cable provider's headend and is responsible
for injecting local weather forecasts into the cable TV
network's programming runs &os;.</para>
</listitem>
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