svn commit: r49662 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status
Benjamin Kaduk
bjk at FreeBSD.org
Sun Nov 13 23:22:54 UTC 2016
Author: bjk
Date: Sun Nov 13 23:22:52 2016
New Revision: 49662
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/49662
Log:
Remove draft notice from 2016Q3 report and tweak introduction
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-07-2016-09.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-07-2016-09.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-07-2016-09.xml Sun Nov 13 18:04:01 2016 (r49661)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-07-2016-09.xml Sun Nov 13 23:22:52 2016 (r49662)
@@ -15,13 +15,8 @@
<section>
<title>Introduction</title>
- <p><strong>This is a draft of the July–September 2016
- status report. Please check back after it is finalized, and
- an announcement email is sent to the &os;-Announce mailing
- list.</strong></p>
-
<p>As focused as we are on the present and what is happening
- now, it is sometimes useful to take a reminder at where we have
+ now, it is sometimes useful to take a fresh look at where we have
come from, and where we are going. This quarter, we had our
newest doc committer working to trace through the tangled
history of many utilities, and we also get a glimpse looking
@@ -38,7 +33,7 @@
<p>The work of the present is no less exciting, with 11.0
making its way out just after the end of Q3, the new core
coming into its own, and much more that you'll have to read
- to find out.</p>
+ and find out.</p>
<p>—Benjamin Kaduk</p>
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