svn commit: r48259 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks
Warren Block
wblock at FreeBSD.org
Fri Feb 26 05:02:03 UTC 2016
Author: wblock
Date: Fri Feb 26 05:02:01 2016
New Revision: 48259
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48259
Log:
Make text slightly less passive. Inspired by the patch submitted in the
PR.
PR: 207505
Submitted by: Erik Gunderson <erikcgunderson at comcast.net>
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml Fri Feb 26 04:59:09 2016 (r48258)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml Fri Feb 26 05:02:01 2016 (r48259)
@@ -918,10 +918,10 @@ scsibus1:
<para>Occasionally, <errorname>Device not configured</errorname>
will be displayed when trying to mount a data
<acronym>CD</acronym>. This usually means that the
- <acronym>CD</acronym> drive thinks that there is no disk in
+ <acronym>CD</acronym> drive has not detected a disk in
the tray, or that the drive is not visible on the bus. It
can take a couple of seconds for a <acronym>CD</acronym>
- drive to realize that a media is present, so be
+ drive to detect media, so be
patient.</para>
<para>Sometimes, a <acronym>SCSI</acronym>
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