svn commit: r48155 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports
Warren Block
wblock at FreeBSD.org
Mon Feb 8 00:29:33 UTC 2016
Author: wblock
Date: Mon Feb 8 00:29:31 2016
New Revision: 48155
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48155
Log:
Revise the portmaster section to remove the "recommended" word. Clarify
and simplify some other points, and fix a couple of spelling errors.
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Sun Feb 7 19:13:26 2016 (r48154)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Mon Feb 8 00:29:31 2016 (r48155)
@@ -278,7 +278,7 @@ subversion17-<replaceable>1.7.16_2</repl
multiple versions available. In case of
<application>subversion</application> there are different
versions available, as well as different compile options.
- In this case, the staticly linked version of
+ In this case, the statically linked version of
<application>subversion</application>. When indicating
which package to install, it is best to specify the
application by the port origin, which is the path in the
@@ -706,7 +706,7 @@ docbook =
options are described in &man.pkg.conf.5;.</para>
<para>Usage information for <application>pkg</application> is
- available in the &man.pkg.8; manpage or by running
+ available in the &man.pkg.8; manual page or by running
<command>pkg</command> without additional arguments.</para>
<para>Each <application>pkg</application> command argument is
@@ -1297,7 +1297,7 @@ Deinstalling ca_root_nss-3.15.1_1... don
<para>Installed ports can be uninstalled using <command>pkg
delete</command>. Examples for using this command can be
- found in the &man.pkg-delete.8; manpage.</para>
+ found in the &man.pkg-delete.8; manual page.</para>
<para>Alternately, <command>make deinstall</command> can be
run in the port's directory:</para>
@@ -1378,12 +1378,11 @@ The deinstallation will free 229 kB
<primary>portmaster</primary>
</indexterm>
- <para>The <package>ports-mgmt/portmaster</package> package or
- port is the recommended tool for upgrading installed ports
- as it is designed to use the tools installed with &os;
- without depending upon other ports. It uses the
- information in <filename>/var/db/pkg/</filename> to
- determine which ports to upgrade. To install this utility
+ <para><package>ports-mgmt/portmaster</package> is a very
+ small utility for upgrading installed ports.
+ It is designed to use the tools installed with &os;
+ without depending on other ports or databases.
+ To install this utility
as a port:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/ports/ports-mgmt/portmaster</userinput>
@@ -1444,17 +1443,17 @@ The deinstallation will free 229 kB
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>portmaster -a</userinput></screen>
<note>
- <para>By default, <application>Portmaster</application> will
- make a backup package before deleting the existing port.
+ <para>By default, <application>Portmaster</application>
+ makes a backup package before deleting the existing port.
If the installation of the new version is successful,
- <application>Portmaster</application> will delete the
- backup. Using <option>-b</option> will instruct
+ <application>Portmaster</application> deletes the
+ backup. Using <option>-b</option> instructs
<application>Portmaster</application> not to automatically
- delete the backup. Adding <option>-i</option> will start
+ delete the backup. Adding <option>-i</option> starts
<application>Portmaster</application> in interactive mode,
prompting for confirmation before upgrading each port.
Many other options are available. Read through the
- manual page for portmaster(8) for details regarding
+ manual page for &man.portmaster.8; for details regarding
their usage.</para>
</note>
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