svn commit: r48574 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/makefiles
Jason Helfman
jgh at FreeBSD.org
Tue Apr 12 18:42:11 UTC 2016
Author: jgh
Date: Tue Apr 12 18:42:10 2016
New Revision: 48574
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48574
Log:
- convert ordered list to unordered list
- address rules verbiage and grammar
Reviewed with: wblock@
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/makefiles/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/makefiles/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/makefiles/chapter.xml Tue Apr 12 18:19:29 2016 (r48573)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/makefiles/chapter.xml Tue Apr 12 18:42:10 2016 (r48574)
@@ -3124,46 +3124,43 @@ ALWAYS_KEEP_DISTFILES= yes
<sect1 xml:id="makefile-comment">
<title><varname>COMMENT</varname></title>
- <para>This is a one-line description of the port. Please respect
- these rules:</para>
+ <para>The comment is a one-line description of a port shown by
+ <command>pkg info</command>. Please follow these rules when
+ composing it:</para>
- <orderedlist>
+ <itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Try to keep the COMMENT value at no longer than 70
- characters, as this line will be used by
- <command>pkg info</command> (see &man.pkg-info.8;) to
- display a one-line summary of the port;</para>
+ <para>The COMMENT string should be 70 characters or less.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Do <emphasis>not</emphasis> include the package name (or
- version number of the software);</para>
+ <para>Do <emphasis>not</emphasis> include the package name or
+ version number of software.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>The comment must begin with a capital and end without
- a period;</para>
+ a period.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Do not start with an indefinite article (that is, A or
- An);</para>
+ An).</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Names are capitalized (for example, Apache, JavaScript,
- Perl);</para>
+ <para>Capitalize names such as Apache, JavaScript, or Perl.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>For lists of words, use the Oxford comma (for example,
- green, red<emphasis>,</emphasis> and blue);</para>
+ <para>Use a serial comma for lists of words: "green,
+ red<emphasis>,</emphasis> and blue."</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Spell check the text.</para>
+ <para>Check for spelling errors.</para>
</listitem>
- </orderedlist>
+ </itemizedlist>
<para>Here is an example:</para>
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