svn commit: r47470 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq

[Jason Helfman]

Author: jgh
Date: Thu Oct  1 15:42:03 2015
New Revision: 47470
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47470

Log:
  - tighten and clarify wording
  
  PR:		203338 (based on)
  Submitted by:	varnishedgreen at aim.com
  Approved by:	wblock@ (mentor)
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D3749

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Thu Oct  1 14:55:39 2015	(r47469)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Thu Oct  1 15:42:03 2015	(r47470)
@@ -3362,12 +3362,12 @@ kern.sched.name: ULE</screen>
 	    deleted, the file is not really removed from the file
 	    system until the program stops using it.  The file is
 	    immediately deleted from the directory listing, however.
-	    As an example, consider a file that is large enough that
-	    its presence affects the output of
-	    <command>du</command> and <command>df</command>.  If this
-	    file is deleted while using <command>more</command> on it,
-	    <command>more</command> does not immediately choke and
-	    complain that it cannot view the file.  The entry is
+	    As an example, consider a file large enough
+	    to affect the output of
+	    <command>du</command> and <command>df</command>.  A
+	    file being viewed with <command>more</command> can be
+	    deleted wihout causing an error.
+	    The entry is
 	    removed from the directory so no other program or user can
 	    access it.  However, <command>du</command> shows that it
 	    is gone as it has walked the directory tree and the