svn commit: r46355 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs

[Allan Jude]

Author: allanjude
Date: Wed Mar 18 23:21:06 2015
New Revision: 46355
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46355

Log:
  Fixup typo and improve grammar in ZFS chapter of handbook
  
  PR:		197804
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D1213
  Submitted by:	Mike M <mike.543 at comcast.net> (original)
  Approved by:	wblock (mentor)
  Sponsored by:	ScaleEngine Inc.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml	Wed Mar 18 22:36:22 2015	(r46354)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml	Wed Mar 18 23:21:06 2015	(r46355)
@@ -1278,9 +1278,10 @@ errors: No known data errors</screen>
 	<link linkend="zfs-term-resilver">resilver</link> operation,
 	the pool can grow to use the capacity of the new device.  For
 	example, consider a mirror of a 1 TB drive and a
-	2 drive.  The usable space is 1 TB.  Then the
-	1 TB is replaced with another 2 TB drive, and the
-	resilvering process duplicates existing data.  Because
+	2 TB drive.  The usable space is 1 TB.  When the
+	1 TB drive is replaced with another 2 TB drive, the
+	resilvering process copies the existing data onto the new
+	drive.  Because
 	both of the devices now have 2 TB capacity, the mirror's
 	available space can be grown to 2 TB.</para>