svn commit: r46329 - head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/cutting-edge

[Ryusuke SUZUKI]

Author: ryusuke
Date: Tue Mar 10 08:31:17 2015
New Revision: 46329
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46329

Log:
  Refine translation.

Modified:
  head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml

Modified: head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml	Mon Mar  9 15:42:37 2015	(r46328)
+++ head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml	Tue Mar 10 08:31:17 2015	(r46329)
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