svn commit: r47015 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status

[Ed Maste]

Author: emaste (src committer)
Date: Sun Jul 19 13:54:43 2015
New Revision: 47015
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47015

Log:
  Edit Foundation entry to be more concise, fix typo
  
  Reviewed by:	wblock
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D3126

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml	Sun Jul 19 07:28:56 2015	(r47014)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml	Sun Jul 19 13:54:43 2015	(r47015)
@@ -2456,7 +2456,7 @@
 	<li>
 	  <p>Infrastructure Support</p>
 
-	  <p>We funded almost $50,000 of equipment to support &os;
+	  <p>The Foundation funded almost $50,000 of equipment to support &os;
 	    infrastructure.  Most of this went towards new and
 	    upgraded servers at the NYI facility.  We sent Glen Barber
 	    there to install the new servers.  You can read all about
@@ -2484,7 +2484,7 @@
 
 	<li>
 	  <p>One of the Foundation's responsibilities is to protect
-	    &os; intellectual property (IT).  This includes protecting
+	    &os; intellectual property (IP).  This includes protecting
 	    the &os; trademarks.  We granted trademark usage
 	    permission to various companies who want to show their
 	    support for &os;.  To get permission to use the
@@ -2542,32 +2542,24 @@
 	      and virtual machine disk images for use within
 	      Qemu.</li>
 
-	    <li>Worked with Colin Percival on testing and refining the
-	      release build code to support building Amazon EC2
-	      images, including auto-publication of the final build
-	      output.</li>
-
-	    <li>Worked with Brad Davis on testing and refining the
-	      release build code to support building Vagrant images
-	      for publication on Hashicorp Atlas.</li>
+	    <li>Worked with Colin Percival and Brad Davis on testing
+	      and refining the release build code to support building
+	      Amazon EC2 images and Vagrant images for Hashicorp Atlas,
+	      respectively.
+	      </li>
 
-	    <li>Reworked the &os;/arm build code, removing the
-	      requirement for third-party utilities, providing a
+	    <li>Reworked the &os;/arm build code to provide a
 	      fully-native build infrastructure for the existing
 	      images (BEAGLEBONE, RPI-B, PANDABOARD, WANDBOARD), and
-	      added support for additional images (GUMSTIX,
+	      add support for additional images (GUMSTIX,
 	      CUBOX/HUMMINGBOARD).</li>
 
 	    <li>Wrote several additional utilities to reduce human
-	      error in several areas of Release Engineering, in
-	      particular automating producing the filesystem hierarchy
-	      used by the FTP mirrors, as well as enhancements to the
-	      internal build scripts used by Release Engineering
-	      (which is publicized in the source tree under
-	      /user/gjb/thermite), and support for automatically
-	      uploading and publishing virtual machine images for
-	      Azure, Google Compute Engine (GCE support was added by
-	      Steve Wills during the last quarter), and Vagrant.</li>
+	      error in several areas of Release Engineering, including
+	      producing the filesystem hierarchy used by the FTP mirrors,
+	      enhancements to the internal build scripts used by Release
+	      Engineering, and support for automatically uploading and
+	      publishing virtual machine images.</li>
 
 	    <li>While attending BSDCan 2015, Glen worked with several
 	      developers and teams on various items, such as
@@ -2579,13 +2571,6 @@
 
 	    <li>Started the 10.2-RELEASE cycle.</li>
 
-	    <li>Continually updated the release notes for 11-CURRENT
-	      and 10-STABLE, the latter of which will be the release
-	      notes for the upcoming 10.2-RELEASE.</li>
-
-	    <li>Assisted the Security Officer with reviewing
-	      correctness of various Security Advisory and Errata
-	      Notice texts.</li>
 	  </ul>
 	</li>
       </ul>