svn commit: r44935 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/nanobsd

Benedict Reuschling bcr at
Sat May 24 15:24:59 UTC 2014

Author: bcr
Date: Sat May 24 15:24:58 2014
New Revision: 44935

  Remove redundant markup and words around filename tags.
  Sprinkle capitalizations over title tags to make igor happy.
  Whitespace fixes will follow next.


Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/nanobsd/article.xml
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/nanobsd/article.xml	Sat May 24 15:13:09 2014	(r44934)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/nanobsd/article.xml	Sat May 24 15:24:58 2014	(r44935)
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
     <title>NanoBSD Howto</title>
     <sect2 xml:id="design">
-      <title>The design of NanoBSD</title>
+      <title>The Design of NanoBSD</title>
       <para>Once the image is present on the medium, it is possible to
 	boot <application>NanoBSD</application>.  The mass storage
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@
 	are expected to persist after the system restarts.</para>
-	<title>Making persistent changes to <filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename></title>
+	<title>Making Persistent Changes to <filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename></title>
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>vi /etc/resolv.conf</userinput>
@@ -140,13 +140,13 @@
 	  all times is not a good idea, especially if
 	  the <application>NanoBSD</application> system runs off a mass
 	  storage medium that may be adversely affected by a large number
-	  of writes to the partition (i.e. when the filesystem syncer
+	  of writes to the partition (like when the filesystem syncer
 	  flushes data to the system disks).</para>
-      <title>Building a NanoBSD image</title>
+      <title>Building a NanoBSD Image</title>
       <para>A <application>NanoBSD</application> image is built using a
 	simple <filename></filename> shell script, which can
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@
-      <title>Customizing a NanoBSD image</title>
+      <title>Customizing a NanoBSD Image</title>
       <para>This is probably the most important and most interesting
 	feature of <application>NanoBSD</application>.  This is also
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@
       <para>Invocation of the following command will force the
 	<filename></filename> to read its configuration from
-	the <filename>myconf.nano</filename> file located in the current
+	<filename>myconf.nano</filename> located in the current
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>sh -c myconf.nano</userinput></screen>
@@ -213,7 +213,7 @@
-	<title>Configuration options</title>
+	<title>Configuration Options</title>
         <para>With configuration settings, it is possible to configure options
           passed to both the <buildtarget>buildworld</buildtarget>
@@ -264,14 +264,14 @@
 	    <para><literal>FlashDevice</literal> — Defines what type of
-	      media to use.  Check the <filename>FlashDevice.sub</filename>
-	      file for more details.</para>
+	      media to use.  Check <filename>FlashDevice.sub</filename>
+	      for more details.</para>
-	<title>Custom functions</title>
+	<title>Custom Functions</title>
 	<para>It is possible to fine-tune
 	  <application>NanoBSD</application> using shell functions in
@@ -322,7 +322,7 @@ customize_cmd cust_etc_size</programlist
-	<title>Adding packages</title>
+	<title>Adding Packages</title>
 	<para>Packages can be added to a <application>NanoBSD</application>
 	  image using a custom function.  The following function will install
@@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ customize_cmd install_packages</programl
-	<title>Configuration file example</title>
+	<title>Configuration File Example</title>
 	<para>A complete example of a configuration file for building a
           custom <application>NanoBSD</application> image can be:</para>
@@ -414,7 +414,7 @@ customize_cmd cust_nobeastie</programlis
 	  <para>The most important difference of this step from the
 	    initial <application>NanoBSD</application> installation is that
-	    now instead of using the <filename>_.disk.full</filename> file
+	    now instead of using <filename>_.disk.full</filename>
 	    (which contains an image of the entire disk),
 	    the <filename>_.disk.image</filename> image is installed (which
 	    contains an image of a single system partition).</para>

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