svn commit: r44898 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security

Allan Jude allanjude at
Wed May 21 15:04:32 UTC 2014

Author: allanjude
Date: Wed May 21 15:04:31 2014
New Revision: 44898

  Fix grammer and remove a comma
  Submitted by:	dru
  Approved by:	eadler (mentor)


Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml	Wed May 21 09:55:55 2014	(r44897)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml	Wed May 21 15:04:31 2014	(r44898)
@@ -3384,9 +3384,9 @@ UWWemqWuz3lAZuORQ9KX
 	  <para>The <literal>Corrected</literal> field indicates the
 	    date, time, time offset, and releases that were
 	    corrected.  The section in parentheses shows each branch
-	    to which the fix has been merged, and the version number
+	    for which the fix has been merged, and the version number
 	    of the corresponding release from that branch.  The
-	    release identifier itself, includes the version number
+	    release identifier itself includes the version number
 	    and, if appropriate, the patch level.  The patch level is
 	    the letter <literal>p</literal> followed by a number,
 	    indicating the sequence number of the patch, allowing

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