svn commit: r44842 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq

Benjamin Kaduk bjk at
Thu May 15 19:23:49 UTC 2014

Author: bjk
Date: Thu May 15 19:23:49 2014
New Revision: 44842

  Fix a typo and a minor grammar nit in the FAQ
  Approved by:	hrs (mentor)


Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Thu May 15 14:13:12 2014	(r44841)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Thu May 15 19:23:49 2014	(r44842)
@@ -6310,9 +6310,9 @@ set dfilter 3 permit 0/0 0/0</programlis
 CCP: Received Terminate Ack (1) state = Req-Sent (6)</programlisting>
 	  <para>This is because &man.ppp.8; is trying to negotiate
-	    Predictor1 compression, and the peer does not want to
+	    Predictor1 compression, but the peer does not want to
 	    negotiate any compression at all.  The messages are
-	    harmless, but can be disabled with:</para>
+	    harmless, but can be silenced by disabling the compression:</para>
 	  <programlisting>disable pred1</programlisting>
@@ -6334,7 +6334,7 @@ CCP: Received Terminate Ack (1) state = 
 	  <para>This will make &man.ppp.8; log everything up until the
 	    last requested <quote>expect</quote> string.</para>
-	  <para>To seether connect speed when using
+	  <para>To see the connect speed when using
 	    PAP or CHAP,
 	    make sure to configure &man.ppp.8; to
 	    expect the whole CONNECT line, using something

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