svn commit: r44763 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports

Benedict Reuschling bcr at
Mon May 5 18:37:48 UTC 2014

Author: bcr
Date: Mon May  5 18:37:48 2014
New Revision: 44763

  Rephrase a section from the last commit to avoid the use of "you" and
  Noticed by:	wblock


Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	Mon May  5 16:03:30 2014	(r44762)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	Mon May  5 18:37:48 2014	(r44763)
@@ -202,9 +202,10 @@
 	for security issues related to the application or install
 	<package>ports-mgmt/portaudit</package>.  Once installed, type
 	<command>portaudit -F -a</command> to check all installed
-	applications for known vulnerabilities.  If you are using
-	<application>pkg</application>, the audit functionality is
-	built in.  Simply run: <command>pkg audit -F</command>.</para>
+	applications for known vulnerabilities.  When
+	<application>pkg</application> is being used the audit
+	functionality is built in.  Execute <command>pkg audit
+	  -F</command> to get a report on vulnerable packages.</para>
     <para>The remainder of this chapter explains how to use packages

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