svn commit: r44310 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config

[Dru Lavigne]

Author: dru
Date: Fri Mar 21 16:12:49 2014
New Revision: 44310
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44310

Log:
  Small fixes to Managing Services. This section still needs a more
  thorough review.
  
  Submitted by: bjk
  Sponsored by: iXsystems

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml	Fri Mar 21 15:40:02 2014	(r44309)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml	Fri Mar 21 16:12:49 2014	(r44310)
@@ -568,8 +568,8 @@ sshd is running as pid 433.</screen>
 
       <para>A number of strategies may be applied in clustered
 	applications to separate site-wide configuration from
-	system-specific configuration in order to keep administration
-	overhead down.  The recommended approach is to place
+	system-specific configuration in order to reduce administration
+	overhead.  The recommended approach is to place
 	system-specific configuration into
 	<filename>/etc/rc.conf.local</filename>.  For example, these
 	entries in <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename> apply to all
@@ -579,7 +579,7 @@ sshd is running as pid 433.</screen>
 keyrate="fast"
 defaultrouter="10.1.1.254"</programlisting>
 
-      <para>Whereas these systems in
+      <para>Whereas these entries in
 	<filename>/etc/rc.conf.local</filename> apply to this system
 	only:</para>
 
@@ -587,7 +587,8 @@ defaultrouter="10.1.1.254"</programlisti
 ifconfig_fxp0="inet 10.1.1.1/8"</programlisting>
 
       <para>Distribute <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename> to every
-	system using <command>rsync</command> or a similar program,
+	system using an application such as <application>rsync</application> or
+	<application>puppet</application>,
 	while <filename>/etc/rc.conf.local</filename> remains
 	unique.</para>
 
@@ -596,8 +597,9 @@ ifconfig_fxp0="inet 10.1.1.1/8"</program
 	information will not be lost.</para>
 
       <tip>
-	<para>The configuration in <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename>
-	  is parsed by &man.sh.1;.  This allows system operators to
+	<para>Both <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename> and
+	  <filename>/etc/rc.conf.local</filename>
+	  are parsed by &man.sh.1;.  This allows system operators to
 	  create complex configuration scenarios.  Refer to
 	  &man.rc.conf.5; for further information on this
 	  topic.</para>