svn commit: r44285 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers

Dru Lavigne dru at FreeBSD.org
Wed Mar 19 13:50:11 UTC 2014


Author: dru
Date: Wed Mar 19 13:50:10 2014
New Revision: 44285
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44285

Log:
  Finish editorial review of iSCSI chapter.
  
  Sponsored by: iXsystems

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	Wed Mar 19 13:23:11 2014	(r44284)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	Wed Mar 19 13:50:10 2014	(r44285)
@@ -5857,83 +5857,75 @@ target iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0 {
       <title>Configuring an <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> Initiator</title>
 
       <note>
-	<para>The current <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> initiator is
+	<para>The <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> initiator described in this section is
 	  supported starting with &os; 10.0-RELEASE.  To use the
 	  <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> initiator available in older
-	  versions, refer to &man.iscontrol.8;.
-	  This chapter only applies to the new initiator.</para>
+	  versions, refer to &man.iscontrol.8;.</para>
       </note>
 
-      <para>The <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> initiator requires the <link
-	  xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=iscsid&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+10-current">iscsid(8)</link>
-	daemon to run.  It does not use a configuration file.  To
+      <para>The <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> initiator requires that the &man.iscsid.8;
+	daemon is running.  This daemon does not use a configuration file.  To
 	start it automatically at boot, add this line to
 	<filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename>:</para>
 
       <programlisting>iscsid_enable="YES"</programlisting>
 
-      <para>On a new machine being configured as an
-	<acronym>iSCSI</acronym> initiator, <link
-	  xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=iscsid&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+10-current">iscsid(8)</link>
-	can be started by running this command as <systemitem
-	  class="username">root</systemitem>:</para>
+      <para>To start &man.iscsid.8; now,
+	run this command:</para>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>service iscsid start</userinput></screen>
 
       <para>Connecting to a target can be done with or without an
-	<link
-	  xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=iscsi.conf&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+10-current">iscsi.conf(8)</link>
-	configuration file.</para>
+	<filename>/etc/iscsi.conf</filename>
+	configuration file.  This section demonstrates both types of
+	connections.</para>
 
       <sect3>
 	<title>Connecting to a Target Without a Configuration
 	  File</title>
 
-	<para>To make the initiator connect to a single target, run
-	  this command as <systemitem
-	    class="username">root</systemitem>:</para>
-
-	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>iscsictl -A -p 10.10.10.10 -t iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0</userinput></screen>
-
-	<para>To verify if the connection succeeded, run it without
-	  arguments.  The output should look like this:</para>
+	<para>To connect an initiator to a single target, specify the
+	  <acronym>IP</acronym> address of the portal and the name of
+	  the target:</para>
+
+	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>iscsictl -A -p <replaceable>10.10.10.10</replaceable> -t <replaceable>iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0</replaceable></userinput></screen>
+
+	<para>To verify if the connection succeeded, run
+	  <command>iscsictl</command> without any
+	  arguments.  The output should look similar to this:</para>
 
 	<programlisting>Target name                                     Target portal   State
 iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0                 10.10.10.10     Connected: da0</programlisting>
 
-	<para>This shows that the <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> session was
+	<para>In this example, the <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> session was
 	  successfully established, with <filename>/dev/da0</filename>
 	  representing the attached <acronym>LUN</acronym>.  If the
 	  <literal>iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0</literal> target
 	  exports more than one <acronym>LUN</acronym>, multiple
-	  device nodes will be shown in the <link
-	    xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=iscsictl&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+10-current">iscictl(8)</link>
+	  device nodes will be shown in that section of the
 	  output:</para>
 
 	<screen>Connected: da0 da1 da2.</screen>
 
-	<para>Any errors are reported in the system logs, and also
-	  visible in the <link
-	    xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=iscsictl&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+10-current">iscictl(8)</link>
-	  output.  For example, this usually means the <link
-	    xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=iscsid&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+10-current">iscsid(8)</link>
+	<para>Any errors will be reported in the output, as well as the system logs.
+	  For example, this message usually means that the &man.iscsid.8;
 	  daemon is not running:</para>
 
 	<programlisting>Target name                                     Target portal   State
 iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0                 10.10.10.10     Waiting for iscsid(8)</programlisting>
 
-	<para>The following suggests a network-level problem, such as
+	<para>The following message suggests a networking problem, such as
 	  a wrong <acronym>IP</acronym> address or port:</para>
 
 	<programlisting>Target name                                     Target portal   State
 iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0                 10.10.10.11     Connection refused</programlisting>
 
-	<para>This means the specified target name was wrong:</para>
+	<para>This message means that the specified target name is wrong:</para>
 
 	<programlisting>Target name                                     Target portal   State
 iqn.2012-06.com.example:atrget0                 10.10.10.10     Not found</programlisting>
 
-	<para>This means the target requires authentication:</para>
+	<para>This message means that the target requires authentication:</para>
 
 	<programlisting>Target name                                     Target portal   State
 iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0                 10.10.10.10     Authentication failed</programlisting>
@@ -5941,7 +5933,7 @@ iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0         
 	<para>To specify a <acronym>CHAP</acronym> username and
 	  secret, use this syntax:</para>
 
-	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>iscsictl -A -p 10.10.10.10 -t iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0 -u user -s secretsecret</userinput></screen>
+	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>iscsictl -A -p <replaceable>10.10.10.10</replaceable> -t <replaceable>iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0</replaceable> -u <replaceable>user</replaceable> -s <replaceable>secretsecret</replaceable></userinput></screen>
       </sect3>
 
       <sect3>
@@ -5960,19 +5952,19 @@ iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0         
 	chapSecret      = secretsecret
 }</programlisting>
 
-	<para><literal>t0</literal> specifies a nickname for the
-	  configuration file section, used at the initiator side to
-	  specify which configuration to use.  The following lines
-	  specify various parameters used during connection.  Target
-	  address and name are mandatory, others are optional.  In
-	  this example, <acronym>CHAP</acronym> username and secret
+	<para>The <literal>t0</literal> specifies a nickname for the
+	  configuration file section.  It will be used by the initiator to
+	  specify which configuration to use.  The other lines
+	  specify the parameters to use during connection.  The <literal>TargetAddress</literal>
+	  and <literal>TargetName</literal> are mandatory, whereas the other options are optional.  In
+	  this example, the <acronym>CHAP</acronym> username and secret
 	  are shown.</para>
 
-	<para>To connect to the target defined above, use:</para>
+	<para>To connect to the defined target, specify the nickname:</para>
 
-	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>iscsictl -An t0</userinput></screen>
+	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>iscsictl -An <replaceable>t0</replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
-	<para>To connect to all targets defined in the configuration
+	<para>Alternately, to connect to all targets defined in the configuration
 	  file, use:</para>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>iscsictl -Aa</userinput></screen>


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