svn commit: r45157 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/p4-primer

[Eitan Adler]

Author: eadler
Date: Sun Jun 29 08:40:28 2014
New Revision: 45157
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45157

Log:
  Eliminate the word 'community' here: it implies the very oppisite of what is true.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/p4-primer/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/p4-primer/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/p4-primer/article.xml	Sun Jun 29 08:30:13 2014	(r45156)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/p4-primer/article.xml	Sun Jun 29 08:40:28 2014	(r45157)
@@ -903,8 +903,8 @@
       <application>Perforce</application>.</para>
 
     <para>Access to the &os; <application>Perforce</application>
-      server does not imply membership in the &os; CVS committer
-      community, though we happily encourage all students to consider
+      server does not imply access to subversion, though we happily
+      encourage all students to consider
       joining the project when the time is appropriate.</para>
   </sect1>
 </article>