svn commit: r45371 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking
Gavin Atkinson
gavin at FreeBSD.org
Thu Jul 24 20:51:39 UTC 2014
Author: gavin
Date: Thu Jul 24 20:51:38 2014
New Revision: 45371
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45371
Log:
Fix a couple of unrelated issues in the Wi-Fi section:
- Wi-Fi Alliance needs a capital "A"
- Change the word "security" to "network" in a paragraph talking about
diagnosing connectivity issues. I suspect this is a copy/paste error.
This paragraph also needs to be moved, I shall do that in a separate
commit.
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml Thu Jul 24 20:12:15 2014 (r45370)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml Thu Jul 24 20:51:38 2014 (r45371)
@@ -1365,7 +1365,7 @@ wlan0: flags=8843<UP,BROADCAST,RUNNIN
first <acronym>EAP</acronym> method to be certified
by the <link
xlink:href="http://www.wi-fi.org/">Wi-Fi
- alliance</link>. <acronym>EAP-TLS</acronym> requires
+ Alliance</link>. <acronym>EAP-TLS</acronym> requires
three certificates to run: the certificate of the
Certificate Authority (<acronym>CA</acronym>) installed
on all machines, the server certificate for the
@@ -2195,7 +2195,7 @@ freebsdap 00:11:95:c3:0d:ac 1
<listitem>
<para>Once the system can associate with the access point,
- diagnose the security configuration using tools like
+ diagnose the network configuration using tools like
&man.ping.8;.</para>
<para>Debugging support is provided by
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