svn commit: r45197 - head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/mirrors

[Ryusuke SUZUKI]

Author: ryusuke
Date: Wed Jul  2 11:52:17 2014
New Revision: 45197
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45197

Log:
  - Merge the following from the English version:
  
  	r44073 -> r44586	head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml

Modified:
  head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml

Modified: head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml	Wed Jul  2 11:27:59 2014	(r45196)
+++ head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml	Wed Jul  2 11:52:17 2014	(r45197)
@@ -3,27 +3,24 @@
      The FreeBSD Documentation Project
      The FreeBSD Japanese Documentation Project
 
-     Original revision: r44073
+     Original revision: r44586
      $FreeBSD$
 -->
 <appendix xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0" xml:id="mirrors">
   <title>&os; ¤ÎÆþ¼êÊýË¡</title>
 
   <sect1 xml:id="mirrors-cdrom">
-    <title>CDROM/DVD ½ÐÈǼÒ</title>
+    <title><acronym>CD</acronym> ¤ª¤è¤Ó
+      <acronym>DVD</acronym> ¥»¥Ã¥È</title>
 
-    <sect2>
-      <title>CD/DVD ¥»¥Ã¥È</title>
-
-      <para>&os; ¤Î CD/DVD ¥»¥Ã¥È¤Ï°Ê²¼¤Î¥ª¥ó¥é¥¤¥ó¶È¼Ô¤«¤éÆþ¼ê¤Ç¤­¤Þ¤¹¡£</para>
+      <para>&os; ¤Î <acronym>CD</acronym> ¤ª¤è¤Ó <acronym>DVD</acronym>
+	¤Î¥»¥Ã¥È¤Ï°Ê²¼¤Î¥ª¥ó¥é¥¤¥ó¶È¼Ô¤«¤éÆþ¼ê¤Ç¤­¤Þ¤¹¡£</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
-	  <address>
-	    &os; Mall, Inc.
+	  <address>&os; Mall, Inc.
 	    <street>2420 Sand Creek Rd C-1 #347</street>
-	    <city>Brentwood</city>,
-	    <state>CA</state>
+	    <city>Brentwood</city>, <state>CA</state>
 	    <postcode>94513</postcode>
 	    <country>USA</country>
 	    ÅÅÏÃ: <phone>+1 925 240-6652</phone>
@@ -35,17 +32,19 @@
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <address>
-	    Dr. Hinner EDV
+	  <address>Dr. Hinner EDV
 	    <street>Kochelseestr. 11</street>
 	    <postcode>D-81371</postcode> <city>München</city>
 	    <country>Germany</country>
 	    ÅÅÏÃ: <phone>(0177) 428 419 0</phone>
+	    Email: <email>infow at hinner.de</email>
 	    WWW: <otheraddr
 	      xlink:href="http://www.hinner.de/linux/freebsd.html">http://www.hinner.de/linux/freebsd.html</otheraddr>
 	  </address>
 	</listitem>
 
+<!--
+This site is just showing the Apache test page.
 	<listitem>
 	  <address>
 	    Linux Distro UK
@@ -58,9 +57,9 @@
 	  </address>
 	</listitem>
 
+This site doesn't have any products newer than 8.1 which is now EOL'd    
 	<listitem>
-	  <address>
-	    The Linux Emporium
+	  <address>The Linux Emporium
 	    <street>The Techno Centre, Puma Way</street>
 	    <city>Parkside</city>
 	    <postcode>CV1 2TT</postcode>
@@ -71,22 +70,21 @@
 	      xlink:href="http://www.linuxemporium.co.uk/products/bsd/">http://www.linuxemporium.co.uk/products/bsd/</otheraddr>
 	  </address>
 	</listitem>
+-->
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <address>
-	    LinuxCenter.Ru
+	  <address>Linux Center
 	    <street>Galernaya Street, 55</street>
 	    <city>Saint-Petersburg</city>
 	    <postcode>190000</postcode>
 	    <country>Russia</country>
-	    ÅÅÏÃ: <phone>+7-812-3125208</phone>
+	    ÅÅÏÃ: <phone>+7-812-309-06-86</phone>
 	    Email: <email>info at linuxcenter.ru</email>
 	    WWW: <otheraddr
 	      xlink:href="http://linuxcenter.ru/shop/freebsd">http://linuxcenter.ru/shop/freebsd</otheraddr>
 	  </address>
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
-    </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 xml:id="mirrors-ftp">
@@ -524,7 +522,7 @@ Comment out for now until these can be v
 
       <para>°Ê²¼¤Î¤è¤¦¤ËÆþÎϤ·¤Æ¡¢¥ê¥Ý¥¸¥È¥ê¤«¤é¥Á¥§¥Ã¥¯¥¢¥¦¥È¤·¤Æ¤¯¤À¤µ¤¤¡£</para>
 
-      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>svn checkout svn-mirror/repository/branch lwcdir</userinput></screen>
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>svn checkout <replaceable>svn-mirror</replaceable>/<replaceable>repository</replaceable>/<replaceable>branch</replaceable> <replaceable>lwcdir</replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
       <para>¤³¤³¤Ç¡¢<replaceable>repository</replaceable>,
 	<replaceable>branch</replaceable> ¤ª¤è¤Ó <replaceable>root</replaceable>
@@ -578,7 +576,7 @@ Comment out for now until these can be v
 	¤½¤ì¤¬ <command>svn</command> ¤Ë¤è¤Ã¤ÆÀ¸À®¤µ¤ì¤¿¤â¤Î¤Ç¤Ê¤±¤ì¤Ð¡¢
 	¥Á¥§¥Ã¥¯¥¢¥¦¥È¤¹¤ëÁ°¤Ë¡¢Ì¾Á°¤òÊѹ¹¤¹¤ë¤«ºï½ü¤·¤Æ¤¯¤À¤µ¤¤¡£</para>
 
-      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>svn checkout https://svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org/ports/head /usr/ports</userinput></screen>
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>svn checkout <replaceable>https://svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org</replaceable>/ports/head /usr/ports</userinput></screen>
 
       <para>½é¤á¤Æ¥Á¥§¥Ã¥¯¥¢¥¦¥È¤¹¤ëºÝ¤Ë¤Ï¡¢
 	¥ê¥â¡¼¥È¥ê¥Ý¥¸¥È¥ê¤Î¤¹¤Ù¤Æ¤Î¥Ö¥é¥ó¥Á¤ò¥À¥¦¥ó¥í¡¼¥É¤¹¤ë¤Î¤Ç»þ´Ö¤¬¤«¤«¤ê¤Þ¤¹¡£
@@ -587,7 +585,7 @@ Comment out for now until these can be v
       <para>½é¤á¤Æ¤Î¥Á¥§¥Ã¥¯¥¢¥¦¥È¸å¤Ï¡¢
 	°Ê²¼¤ò¼Â¹Ô¤¹¤ë¤³¤È¤Ç¥í¡¼¥«¥ëºî¶È¥³¥Ô¡¼¤ò¥¢¥Ã¥×¥Ç¡¼¥È¤Ç¤­¤Þ¤¹¡£</para>
 
-      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>svn update lwcdir</userinput></screen>
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>svn update <replaceable>lwcdir</replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
       <para>¤³¤ÎÎã¤ÇºîÀ®¤µ¤ì¤¿
 	<filename>/usr/ports</filename> ¤ò¥¢¥Ã¥×¥Ç¡¼¥È¤¹¤ë¤Ë¤Ï¡¢