svn commit: r43464 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail

[Remko Lodder]

On 10 Jan 2014, at 14:48, Remko Lodder <remko at FreeBSD.org> wrote:

> Author: remko
> Date: Fri Jan 10 13:48:36 2014
> New Revision: 43464
> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43464
> 
> Log:
>  Correct a typo and rewrap the paragraph a bit so that it is
>  conform the FDP.
> 
>  PR:		185632
>  Submitted by:	Jack Force

Since this is partially under worktime I should add:

Facilitated by:	Snow B.V.

Apologies for forgetting that.

> 
> Modified:
>  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml
> 
> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml	Fri Jan 10 11:03:44 2014	(r43463)
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml	Fri Jan 10 13:48:36 2014	(r43464)
> @@ -1028,10 +1028,9 @@ www.example.org</programlisting>
> 
>       <para>Out of the box, one can send email to external hosts as
> 	long as <filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename> is configured or
> -	the network has access to a configured
> -	<acronym>DNS</acronym> server.  If order to have mail
> -	delivered to the  <acronym>MTA</acronym> on the &os; host,
> -	do one of the following:</para>
> +	the network has access to a configured <acronym>DNS</acronym>
> +	server.  To have email delivered to the <acronym>MTA</acronym>
> +	on the &os; host, do one of the following:</para>
> 
>       <itemizedlist>
> 	<listitem>

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