svn commit: r43435 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status

Sun Jan 5 20:58:57 UTC 2014

Author: pgj
Date: Sun Jan  5 20:58:56 2014
New Revision: 43435
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43435

Log:
  - Minor fixes to the 2013Q4 status report
  
  Submitted by:	pluknet

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-10-2013-12.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-10-2013-12.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-10-2013-12.xml	Sun Jan  5 19:22:41 2014	(r43434)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-10-2013-12.xml	Sun Jan  5 20:58:56 2014	(r43435)
@@ -222,28 +222,28 @@
     <body>
       <p>Rockchip is a series of SoC (System on Chip) integrated
 	circuits that are mainly for embedded systems applications in
-	mobile entertainment devices such smartphones, tablets, e-books,
+	mobile entertainment devices such as smartphones, tablets, e-books,
 	set-top boxes, media players, personal video, and MP3 players.
-	Due to their evolution from the MP3/MP4 player market most
+	Due to their evolution from the MP3/MP4 player market, most
 	Rockchip ICs feature advanced media decoding logic but lack
 	integrated cellular radio basebands.  Initial support of
 	Rockchip RK3188 (Quad core Cortex A9) SoC is committed to
 	<tt>head</tt>.  Now &os; runs on Radxa Rock and it supports
-	following peripherals:</p>
+	the following peripherals:</p>
 
       <ul>
 	<li>Existing DWC OTG driver in host mode</li>
 	<li>GPIO</li>
       </ul>
 
-      <p>Some work was also done the on initial support of Qualcomm
+      <p>Some work was also done on the initial support of Qualcomm
 	Snapdragon S4 SoC, featuring the Krait CPU, which is considered
 	a "platform" for use in smartphones, tablets, and smartbook
 	devices.  Krait has many similarities with the ARM Cortex-A15
 	CPU and is also based on the ARMv7 instruction set.  A minimal
-	console driver was written and &os;'s early boot messages can be
-	now seen on the serial console.  The timer driver works too, and
-	the boot now stops at the mountroot prompt.</p>
+	console driver was written, and &os;'s early boot messages can
+	be now seen on the serial console.  The timer driver works too,
+	and the boot now stops at the mountroot prompt.</p>
     </body>
   </project>
 
