svn commit: r46047 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks

Benedict Reuschling bcr at FreeBSD.org
Tue Dec 2 11:26:59 UTC 2014


Author: bcr
Date: Tue Dec  2 11:26:58 2014
New Revision: 46047
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46047

Log:
  Remove redundant markup and words in a sentence. Provide proper
  capitalization in title tags.
  
  Obtained from:	igor(8) output

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml	Tue Dec  2 11:15:50 2014	(r46046)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml	Tue Dec  2 11:26:58 2014	(r46047)
@@ -1604,8 +1604,8 @@ scsibus1:
       <para>Instead, one can use <command>dump</command> and
 	<command>restore</command> in a more secure fashion over an
 	<acronym>SSH</acronym> connection.  This example creates a
-	full, compressed backup of the <filename>/usr</filename> file
-	system and sends the backup file to the specified host over a
+	full, compressed backup of <filename>/usr</filename> and sends
+	the backup file to the specified host over a
 	<acronym>SSH</acronym> connection.</para>
 
       <example>
@@ -1656,7 +1656,7 @@ scsibus1:
 	same directory that is being backed up.</para>
 
       <example>
-	<title>Backing Up the Current Directory With
+	<title>Backing Up the Current Directory with
 	  <command>tar</command></title>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>tar czvf <replaceable>/tmp/mybackup.tgz</replaceable> . </userinput></screen>
@@ -1670,7 +1670,7 @@ scsibus1:
 	backup to restore.</para>
 
       <example>
-	<title>Restoring Up the Current Directory With
+	<title>Restoring Up the Current Directory with
 	  <command>tar</command></title>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>tar xzvf <replaceable>/tmp/mybackup.tgz</replaceable></userinput></screen>
@@ -1728,7 +1728,7 @@ scsibus1:
 	examples would be:</para>
 
       <example>
-	<title>Backing Up the Current Directory With
+	<title>Backing Up the Current Directory with
 	  <command>pax</command></title>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pax -wf <replaceable>/tmp/mybackup.pax</replaceable> .</userinput></screen>


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