svn commit: r44584 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers

Dru Lavigne dru at
Wed Apr 16 18:27:12 UTC 2014

Author: dru
Date: Wed Apr 16 18:27:11 2014
New Revision: 44584

  Fix a few typos and redundancy.
  Sponsored by:	iXsystems


Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	Wed Apr 16 18:10:02 2014	(r44583)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	Wed Apr 16 18:27:11 2014	(r44584)
@@ -303,8 +303,8 @@ server-program-arguments</programlisting
 	    <para><option>wait|nowait</option> indicates whether or
 	      not the service is able to handle its own socket.
-	      <option>dgram</option> socket types must use the
-	      <option>wait</option> option while
+	      <option>dgram</option> socket types must use
+	      <option>wait</option> while
 	      <option>stream</option> daemons, which are usually
 	      multi-threaded, should use <option>nowait</option>.
 	      <option>wait</option> usually hands off multiple sockets
@@ -746,8 +746,8 @@ mountd_flags="-r"</programlisting>
       <para>The client now has everything it needs to mount a remote
 	file system.  In these examples, the server's name is
 	<systemitem>server</systemitem> and the client's name is
-	<systemitem>client</systemitem>.  To mount the
-	<filename>/home</filename> file system on
+	<systemitem>client</systemitem>.  To mount
+	<filename>/home</filename> on
 	<systemitem>server</systemitem> to the
 	<filename>/mnt</filename> mount point on
@@ -1898,7 +1898,7 @@ INTERNS (,able,test-domain)     (,baker,
       <para>Netgroup names longer than 8 characters should not be
 	The names are case sensitive and using capital letters
-	letters for netgroup names is an easy way to distinguish
+	for netgroup names is an easy way to distinguish
 	between user, machine and netgroup names.</para>
       <para>Some non-&os; <acronym>NIS</acronym> clients cannot
@@ -1977,7 +1977,7 @@ ellington&prompt.user; <userinput>ypcat 
 	<literal>+ at IT_EMP:::::::::</literal>.  Otherwise, all user
 	accounts imported from <acronym>NIS</acronym> will have
 	<filename>/sbin/nologin</filename> as their login
-	shell and noone will be able to login to the system.</para>
+	shell and no one will be able to login to the system.</para>
       <para>To configure the less important servers, replace the old
 	<literal>+:::::::::</literal> on the servers with these
@@ -2348,7 +2348,7 @@ allow bind_v2</programlisting>
 	<option>cn=Manager</option>.  Before saving this file, place
 	the <option>rootpw</option> in front of the password output
 	from <command>slappasswd</command> and delete the old
-	<option>rootpw</option> option above.  The end result should
+	<option>rootpw</option>.  The end result should
 	look similar to this:</para>
       <programlisting>TLSCipherSuite HIGH:MEDIUM:+SSLv3
@@ -4635,7 +4635,7 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c
 	  <application>MySQL</application>, or
 	  <application>SQLite</application> databases, with the
 	  default being <application>SQLite</application>.  To change
-	  the datbase engine, type <command>make config</command>
+	  the database engine, type <command>make config</command>
 	  within <filename>/usr/ports/www/py-django</filename>, then
 	  install the port.</para>
@@ -4677,7 +4677,7 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c
 	  source web framework that provides a full development stack.
 	  It is optimized to make web developers more productive and
 	  capable of writing powerful applications quickly.  On &os;,
-	  tt can be installed using the
+	  it can be installed using the
 	  <package>www/rubygem-rails</package> package or port.</para>
 	<para>Refer to <uri
@@ -4882,15 +4882,15 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c
 	<filename>/usr/local/etc/smb.conf</filename> and customized
 	before <application>Samba</application> can be used.</para>
-      <para>The <filename>smb.conf</filename> file contains runtime
-	configuration information for
-	<application>Samba</application>, such as definitions of the
+      <para>Runtime configuration information for
+	<application>Samba</application> is found in
+	<filename>smb.conf</filename>, such as definitions of the
 	printers and <quote>file system shares</quote> that will
 	be shared with &windows; clients.  The
 	<application>Samba</application> package includes a web based
 	tool called <application>swat</application> which provides a
-	simple way of configuring the <filename>smb.conf</filename>
-	file.</para>
+	simple way for configuring
+	<filename>smb.conf</filename>.</para>
 	<title>Using the Samba Web Administration Tool (SWAT)</title>
@@ -4960,8 +4960,8 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c
 	    <term><literal>server string</literal></term>
-	      <para>The string that will be displayed with the
-		<command>net view</command> command and some other
+	      <para>The string that will be displayed in the output of
+		<command>net view</command> and some other
 		networking tools that seek to display descriptive text
 		about the server.</para>
@@ -5019,8 +5019,8 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c
 	<para>Assuming that the default <literal>smbpasswd</literal>
-	  backend is used, the
-	  <filename>/usr/local/etc/samba/smbpasswd</filename> file
+	  backend is used,
+	  <filename>/usr/local/etc/samba/smbpasswd</filename>
 	  must be created to allow <application>Samba</application> to
 	  authenticate clients.  To provide &unix; user accounts
 	  access from &windows; clients, use the following command to
@@ -5557,7 +5557,7 @@         
-	<title>Connecting to a Target With a Configuration
+	<title>Connecting to a Target with a Configuration
 	<para>To connect using a configuration file, create

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