svn commit: r44584 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers
Dru Lavigne
dru at FreeBSD.org
Wed Apr 16 18:27:12 UTC 2014
Author: dru
Date: Wed Apr 16 18:27:11 2014
New Revision: 44584
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44584
Log:
Fix a few typos and redundancy.
Sponsored by: iXsystems
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Wed Apr 16 18:10:02 2014 (r44583)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Wed Apr 16 18:27:11 2014 (r44584)
@@ -303,8 +303,8 @@ server-program-arguments</programlisting
<para><option>wait|nowait</option> indicates whether or
not the service is able to handle its own socket.
- <option>dgram</option> socket types must use the
- <option>wait</option> option while
+ <option>dgram</option> socket types must use
+ <option>wait</option> while
<option>stream</option> daemons, which are usually
multi-threaded, should use <option>nowait</option>.
<option>wait</option> usually hands off multiple sockets
@@ -746,8 +746,8 @@ mountd_flags="-r"</programlisting>
<para>The client now has everything it needs to mount a remote
file system. In these examples, the server's name is
<systemitem>server</systemitem> and the client's name is
- <systemitem>client</systemitem>. To mount the
- <filename>/home</filename> file system on
+ <systemitem>client</systemitem>. To mount
+ <filename>/home</filename> on
<systemitem>server</systemitem> to the
<filename>/mnt</filename> mount point on
<systemitem>client</systemitem>:</para>
@@ -1898,7 +1898,7 @@ INTERNS (,able,test-domain) (,baker,
<indexterm><primary>netgroups</primary></indexterm>
<para>Netgroup names longer than 8 characters should not be
The names are case sensitive and using capital letters
- letters for netgroup names is an easy way to distinguish
+ for netgroup names is an easy way to distinguish
between user, machine and netgroup names.</para>
<para>Some non-&os; <acronym>NIS</acronym> clients cannot
@@ -1977,7 +1977,7 @@ ellington&prompt.user; <userinput>ypcat
<literal>+ at IT_EMP:::::::::</literal>. Otherwise, all user
accounts imported from <acronym>NIS</acronym> will have
<filename>/sbin/nologin</filename> as their login
- shell and noone will be able to login to the system.</para>
+ shell and no one will be able to login to the system.</para>
<para>To configure the less important servers, replace the old
<literal>+:::::::::</literal> on the servers with these
@@ -2348,7 +2348,7 @@ allow bind_v2</programlisting>
<option>cn=Manager</option>. Before saving this file, place
the <option>rootpw</option> in front of the password output
from <command>slappasswd</command> and delete the old
- <option>rootpw</option> option above. The end result should
+ <option>rootpw</option>. The end result should
look similar to this:</para>
<programlisting>TLSCipherSuite HIGH:MEDIUM:+SSLv3
@@ -4635,7 +4635,7 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c
<application>MySQL</application>, or
<application>SQLite</application> databases, with the
default being <application>SQLite</application>. To change
- the datbase engine, type <command>make config</command>
+ the database engine, type <command>make config</command>
within <filename>/usr/ports/www/py-django</filename>, then
install the port.</para>
@@ -4677,7 +4677,7 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c
source web framework that provides a full development stack.
It is optimized to make web developers more productive and
capable of writing powerful applications quickly. On &os;,
- tt can be installed using the
+ it can be installed using the
<package>www/rubygem-rails</package> package or port.</para>
<para>Refer to <uri
@@ -4882,15 +4882,15 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c
<filename>/usr/local/etc/smb.conf</filename> and customized
before <application>Samba</application> can be used.</para>
- <para>The <filename>smb.conf</filename> file contains runtime
- configuration information for
- <application>Samba</application>, such as definitions of the
+ <para>Runtime configuration information for
+ <application>Samba</application> is found in
+ <filename>smb.conf</filename>, such as definitions of the
printers and <quote>file system shares</quote> that will
be shared with &windows; clients. The
<application>Samba</application> package includes a web based
tool called <application>swat</application> which provides a
- simple way of configuring the <filename>smb.conf</filename>
- file.</para>
+ simple way for configuring
+ <filename>smb.conf</filename>.</para>
<sect3>
<title>Using the Samba Web Administration Tool (SWAT)</title>
@@ -4960,8 +4960,8 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c
<term><literal>server string</literal></term>
<listitem>
- <para>The string that will be displayed with the
- <command>net view</command> command and some other
+ <para>The string that will be displayed in the output of
+ <command>net view</command> and some other
networking tools that seek to display descriptive text
about the server.</para>
</listitem>
@@ -5019,8 +5019,8 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c
</variablelist>
<para>Assuming that the default <literal>smbpasswd</literal>
- backend is used, the
- <filename>/usr/local/etc/samba/smbpasswd</filename> file
+ backend is used,
+ <filename>/usr/local/etc/samba/smbpasswd</filename>
must be created to allow <application>Samba</application> to
authenticate clients. To provide &unix; user accounts
access from &windows; clients, use the following command to
@@ -5557,7 +5557,7 @@ iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0
</sect3>
<sect3>
- <title>Connecting to a Target With a Configuration
+ <title>Connecting to a Target with a Configuration
File</title>
<para>To connect using a configuration file, create
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