svn commit: r44551 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install
Dru Lavigne
dru at FreeBSD.org
Mon Apr 14 15:59:34 UTC 2014
Author: dru
Date: Mon Apr 14 15:59:33 2014
New Revision: 44551
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44551
Log:
Fix a few grammos.
Sponsored by: iXsystems
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml Mon Apr 14 15:52:42 2014 (r44550)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml Mon Apr 14 15:59:33 2014 (r44551)
@@ -243,7 +243,6 @@
<entry>0x1f0</entry>
- <entry/>
</row>
<row>
@@ -3565,7 +3564,7 @@ Retype new password :</screen>
</mediaobject>
</figure>
- <para><acronym>RPC</acronym>. communication between
+ <para><acronym>RPC</acronym> communication between
<acronym>NFS</acronym> servers and clients is managed by
&man.rpcbind.8; which is required for <acronym>NFS</acronym>
servers to operate correctly. Status monitoring is provided
@@ -4265,7 +4264,7 @@ Please press any key to reboot.</screen>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>A tape will be be used to install &os;.</para>
+ <para>A tape will be used to install &os;.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
@@ -4285,7 +4284,6 @@ Please press any key to reboot.</screen>
<para>The ISO images for each release can be downloaded from
<filename>ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ISO-IMAGES-<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/<replaceable>version</replaceable></filename>
- or the closest mirror.
or the closest mirror. Substitute
<replaceable>arch</replaceable> and
<replaceable>version</replaceable> as appropriate.</para>
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