svn commit: r44407 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization

[Warren Block]

Author: wblock
Date: Tue Apr  1 17:37:49 2014
New Revision: 44407
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44407

Log:
  Miscellaneous fixes and spelling corrections.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml	Tue Apr  1 17:27:11 2014	(r44406)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml	Tue Apr  1 17:37:49 2014	(r44407)
@@ -271,9 +271,9 @@
       </sect3>
     </sect2>
 <!--
-Deactive/hide this section as the instructions in there do NOT work anymore:
+Deactivate/hide this section as the instructions in there do NOT work any more:
 - FreeBSD 7.0 has reached its EOL a long time ago.
-- The needed files from www.fsmware.com are not available anymore, as the
+- The needed files from www.fsmware.com are not available any more, as the
   server is dead.  So it is impossible to follow the instructions in here.
 
 jkois at FreeBSD.org, 2010-06-18
@@ -336,7 +336,7 @@ jkois at FreeBSD.org, 2010-06-18
 	    </step>
 
 	    <step>
-	      <title>Add a menu entry into Grub menu.lst</title>
+	      <title>Add a Menu Entry into Grub <filename>menu.lst</filename></title>
 
 	      <para>Edit <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> and
 		add the following lines:</para>
@@ -348,7 +348,7 @@ module /boot/vmlinuz-2.6.16.33-xen0 root
 	    </step>
 
 	    <step>
-	      <title>Reboot your computer into &xen;</title>
+	      <title>Reboot Your Computer into &xen;</title>
 
 	      <para>First, edit
 		<filename>/etc/xen/xend-config.sxp</filename>, and add
@@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ Domain-0                                
 	</sect3>
 
 	<sect3>
-	  <title>&os; 7-CURRENT domU</title>
+	  <title>&os; 7-CURRENT <emphasis>domU</emphasis></title>
 
 	  <para>Download the &os; domU kernel for
 	    <application>&xen; 3.0</application> and disk image from
@@ -413,8 +413,7 @@ extra += ",boot_single"
 extra += ",kern.hz=100"
 extra += ",vfs.root.mountfrom=ufs:/dev/xbd769a"</programlisting>
 
-	  <para>The <filename>mdroot-7.0.bz2</filename> file should
-	    be uncompressed.</para>
+	  <para>Uncompress <filename>mdroot-7.0.bz2</filename>.</para>
 
 	  <para>Next, the __xen_guest section in
 	    <filename>kernel-current</filename> needs to be altered to
@@ -523,7 +522,7 @@ lo0: flags=8049<UP,LOOPBACK,RUNNING,M
       inet 127.0.0.1 netmask 0xff000000 </screen>
 
 	  <para>On dom0 Slackware, some
-	    <application>&xen;</application> dependant network
+	    <application>&xen;</application> dependent network
 	    interfaces should show up:</para>
 
 	  <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig</userinput>