svn commit: r41755 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction

Eitan Adler eadler at FreeBSD.org
Mon May 27 20:27:04 UTC 2013


Author: eadler
Date: Mon May 27 20:27:03 2013
New Revision: 41755
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41755

Log:
  - Throwing a bunch of random dates and numbers is largely uninteresting so just give some historical background.
  - Remove attribution as the section has been changed and modified many times since then (and should be some more)
  - Change from <quote> to "s where not used as an attribution.
  - Simplify text surrounding snapshots.
  
  Reviewed by:	trhodes

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml	Mon May 27 20:04:01 2013	(r41754)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml	Mon May 27 20:27:03 2013	(r41755)
@@ -541,16 +541,6 @@
       the development model of the project.</para>
 
     <sect2 id="intro-history">
-      <sect2info role="firstperson">
-	<authorgroup>
-	  <author>
-	    <firstname>Jordan</firstname>
-	    <surname>Hubbard</surname>
-	    <contrib>Contributed by </contrib>
-	  </author>
-	</authorgroup>
-      </sect2info>
-
       <title>A Brief History of &os;</title>
 
       <indexterm><primary>386BSD Patchkit</primary></indexterm>
@@ -562,24 +552,24 @@
 	<secondary>history</secondary>
       </indexterm>
       <para>The &os; Project had its genesis in the early part
-	of 1993, partially as an outgrowth of the <quote>Unofficial
-	  386BSDPatchkit</quote> by the patchkit's last 3
-	coordinators: Nate Williams, Rod Grimes and myself.</para>
+	of 1993, partially as an outgrowth of the Unofficial
+	  386BSDPatchkit by the patchkit's last 3
+	coordinators: Nate Williams, Rod Grimes and Jordan
+	Hubbard.</para>
 
       <indexterm><primary>386BSD</primary></indexterm>
-      <para>Our original goal was to produce an intermediate snapshot
+      <para>The original goal was to produce an intermediate snapshot
 	of 386BSD in order to fix a number of problems with it that
-	the patchkit mechanism just was not capable of solving.  Some
-	of you may remember the early working title for the project
-	being <quote>386BSD 0.5</quote> or <quote>386BSD
-	  Interim</quote> in reference to that fact.</para>
+	the patchkit mechanism just was not capable of solving.  The
+	early working title for the project was
+	386BSD 0.5 or 386BSD Interim in
+	reference of that fact.</para>
 
       <indexterm><primary>Jolitz, Bill</primary></indexterm>
       <para>386BSD was Bill Jolitz's operating system, which had been
 	up to that point suffering rather severely from almost a
 	year's worth of neglect.  As the patchkit swelled ever more
-	uncomfortably with each passing day, we were in unanimous
-	agreement that something had to be done and decided to assist
+	uncomfortably with each passing day, they decided to assist
 	Bill by providing this interim <quote>cleanup</quote>
 	snapshot.  Those plans came to a rude halt when Bill Jolitz
 	suddenly decided to withdraw his sanction from the project
@@ -588,12 +578,12 @@
 
       <indexterm><primary>Greenman, David</primary></indexterm>
       <indexterm><primary>Walnut Creek CDROM</primary></indexterm>
-      <para>It did not take us long to decide that the goal remained
-	worthwhile, even without Bill's support, and so we adopted the
-	name <quote>&os;</quote>, coined by David Greenman.  Our
+      <para>The trio thought that the goal remained
+	worthwhile, even without Bill's support, and so they adopted the
+	name "&os;" coined by David Greenman.  The
 	initial objectives were set after consulting with the system's
 	current users and, once it became clear that the project was
-	on the road to perhaps even becoming a reality, I contacted
+	on the road to perhaps even becoming a reality, Jordan contacted
 	Walnut Creek CDROM with an eye toward improving &os;'s
 	distribution channels for those many unfortunates without easy
 	access to the Internet.  Walnut Creek CDROM not only supported
@@ -615,7 +605,7 @@
 	on the 4.3BSD-Lite (<quote>Net/2</quote>) tape from U.C.
 	Berkeley, with many components also provided by 386BSD and the
 	Free Software Foundation.  It was a fairly reasonable success
-	for a first offering, and we followed it with the highly
+	for a first offering, and they followed it with the highly
 	successful &os; 1.1 release in May of 1994.</para>
 
       <indexterm><primary>Novell</primary></indexterm>
@@ -654,83 +644,13 @@
 	more robust and easier to install &os; 2.0.5 release in
 	June of 1995.</para>
 
-      <para>We released &os; 2.1.5 in August of 1996, and it
-	appeared to be popular enough among the ISP and commercial
-	communities that another release along the 2.1-STABLE branch
-	was merited.  This was &os; 2.1.7.1, released in February
-	1997 and capping the end of mainstream development on
-	2.1-STABLE.  Now in maintenance mode, only security
-	enhancements and other critical bug fixes will be done on this
-	branch (RELENG_2_1_0).</para>
-
-      <para>&os; 2.2 was branched from the development mainline
-	(<quote>-CURRENT</quote>) in November 1996 as the RELENG_2_2
-	branch, and the first full release (2.2.1) was released in
-	April 1997.  Further releases along the 2.2 branch were done
-	in the summer and fall of '97, the last of which (2.2.8)
-	appeared in November 1998.  The first official 3.0 release
-	appeared in October 1998 and spelled the beginning of the end
-	for the 2.2 branch.</para>
-
-      <para>The tree branched again on Jan 20, 1999, leading to the
-	4.0-CURRENT and 3.X-STABLE branches.  From 3.X-STABLE, 3.1 was
-	released on February 15, 1999, 3.2 on May 15, 1999, 3.3 on
-	September 16, 1999, 3.4 on December 20, 1999, and 3.5 on
-	June 24, 2000, which was followed a few days later by a minor
-	point release update to 3.5.1, to incorporate some last-minute
-	security fixes to Kerberos.  This will be the final release
-	in the 3.X branch.</para>
-
-      <para>There was another branch on March 13, 2000, which saw the
-	emergence of the 4.X-STABLE branch.  There have been several
-	releases from it so far: 4.0-RELEASE was introduced in March
-	2000, and the last 4.11-RELEASE came out in January
-	2005.</para>
-
-      <para>The long-awaited 5.0-RELEASE was announced on January 19,
-	2003.  The culmination of nearly three years of work, this
-	release started &os; on the path of advanced multiprocessor
-	and application thread support and introduced support for the
-	&ultrasparc; and <literal>ia64</literal> platforms.  This
-	release was followed by 5.1 in June of 2003.  The last 5.X
-	release from the -CURRENT branch was 5.2.1-RELEASE, introduced
-	in February 2004.</para>
-
-      <para>The RELENG_5 branch, created in August 2004, was followed
-	by 5.3-RELEASE, which marked the beginning of the 5-STABLE
-	branch releases.  The most recent 5.5-RELEASE release came out
-	in May 2006.  There will be no additional releases from the
-	RELENG_5 branch.</para>
-
-      <para>The tree was branched again in July 2005, this time for
-	RELENG_6. 6.0-RELEASE, the first release of the 6.X branch,
-	was released in November 2005.  The most recent 6.4-RELEASE
-	came out in November 2008.  There will be no additional
-	releases from the RELENG_6 branch.  This branch is the last
-	branch to support the Alpha architecture.</para>
-
-      <para>The RELENG_7 branch was created in October 2007.  The
-	first release of this branch was 7.0-RELEASE, which came
-	out in February 2008.  The most recent 7.4-RELEASE came out
-	in February 2011.  There will be no additional releases from
-	the RELENG_7 branch.</para>
-
-      <para>The tree was branched again in August 2009, this time for
-	RELENG_8.  8.0-RELEASE, the first release of the 8.X branch,
-	was released in November 2009.  The most recent
-	&rel2.current;-RELEASE came out in &rel2.current.date;.  There
-	will be additional releases from the RELENG_8 branch.</para>
-
-      <para>The RELENG_9 branch was created in September 2011.  The
-	first release of this branch was 9.0-RELEASE, which came
-	out in January 2012.  The most recent &rel.current;-RELEASE
-	came out in &rel.current.date;.  There will be additional
-	releases from the RELENG_9 branch.</para>
+      <para>Since that time, &os; has made a series of releases each
+	time improving the stability, speed, and feature set of the
+	previous version.</para>
 
       <para>For now, long-term development projects continue to take
-	place in the 10.X-CURRENT (trunk) branch, and SNAPshot
-	releases of 10.X on CD-ROM (and, of course, on the net) are
-	continually made available from <ulink
+	place in the 10.X-CURRENT (trunk) branch, and snapshot
+	releases of 10.X are continually made available from <ulink
 	  url="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/snapshots/">the
 	  snapshot server</ulink> as work progresses.</para>
     </sect2>


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