svn commit: r41705 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status

Wed May 22 05:14:38 UTC 2013

Author: pgj
Date: Wed May 22 05:14:38 2013
New Revision: 41705
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41705

Log:
  - Further minor corrections to the 2013Q1 report
  
  Submitted by:	linimon

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-01-2013-03.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-01-2013-03.xml
==============================================================================

--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-01-2013-03.xml	Tue May 21 22:31:24 2013	(r41704)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-01-2013-03.xml	Wed May 22 05:14:38 2013	(r41705)
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@
 	commit bit for safe keeping, and re-instated 1 commit bit.</p>
 
       <p>In February, Mark Linimon (linimon) stepped down from his
-	duties in the team.  Mark had been the longest serving member of
+	duties in the team.  Mark had been the second longest serving member of
 	the team.  Mark had spent many long hours refactoring and
 	documenting the portbuild software to ensure that pointyhat
 	services could be restored.</p>
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@
 	coincide with the end of life for &os; 7.X.</p>
 
       <p>Beat Gaetzi (beat) stepped down from his duties on portmgr@ in
-	March.  Among his notable contributions, was the task of migrating
+	March.  Among his notable contributions was the task of migrating
 	the Ports Tree from the old CVS repo to Subversion.</p>
 
       <p>Bryan Drewery (bdrewery) joined the Ports Management team in
@@ -822,7 +822,7 @@
 	was done to get rid of this in the Glib update to 2.34.  In
 	cooperation with the X11 Team, the usage of
 	<tt>USE_GNOME=pkgconfig</tt> in X components will be removed.
-	After the fallout from this is handled and stranglers are
+	After the fallout from this is handled and stragglers are
 	converted, the <tt>USE_GNOME</tt> option will be removed.</p>
 
       <p>In addition <tt>USE_GNOME=gnomehack</tt> is deprecated and
@@ -842,7 +842,7 @@
 	<li>ViewVC: <a href="http://www.marcuscom.com:8080/viewvc/viewvc.cgi/marcuscom">http://www.marcuscom.com:8080/viewvc/viewvc.cgi/marcuscom</a></li>
       </ul>
 
-      <p>On-going efforts:</p>
+      <p>Ongoing efforts:</p>
 
       <ul>
 	<li><tt>glib</tt> 2.36, <tt>pango</tt> 1.34.0, <tt>gtk</tt>
@@ -978,7 +978,7 @@
 	default, <tt>newfs(8)</tt> sets this area to half of minfree
 	(typically 4% of the data area).</p>
 
-      <p>As with all layout policies, it only affect layouts of things
+      <p>As with all layout policies, it only affects layouts of things
 	allocated after it is put in place.  So these changes will
 	primarily be noticable on newly created file systems.</p>
 
@@ -1220,10 +1220,10 @@
     </links>
 
     <body>
-      <p>ARM architecture is more and more prevailing, not only in the
+      <p>ARM architecture is more and more prevalent, not only in the
 	mobile and embedded space.  Among the more interesting industry
 	trends emerging in the recent months has been the "ARM server"
-	concept.  Some top-tier companies started developing systems
+	concept.  Some top-tier companies have started developing systems
 	like this already (Dell, HP).</p>
 
       <p>Key to &os; success in these new areas are sophisticated
@@ -1310,7 +1310,7 @@
 	FreeBSD 8.4 is released and the ports tree is reopened for
 	commits.</p>
 
-      <p>Work is also on-going to port new versions of MESA and OpenGL,
+      <p>Work is also ongoing to port new versions of MESA and OpenGL,
 	as well as a new version of xorg-server, and perhaps in the
 	future, Wayland.  These are considered more long-term goals and
 	are not targeted for the current update.</p>
@@ -1340,7 +1340,7 @@
 
       <task>Look into replacements for HAL.  HAL is used for
 	hot-plugging of devices, but it has been long abandoned by Linux.
-	A replacement, perhaps build on top of devd would be nice to
+	A replacement, perhaps built on top of devd would be nice to
 	have.  This work should be coordinated with the &os; GNOME and
 	KDE teams.</task>
     </help>
@@ -1365,7 +1365,7 @@
 
     <body>
       <p>This project adds the block IO access accounting to the
-	racct/rctl resource limiting framework, a working prototype
+	racct/rctl resource limiting framework; a working prototype
 	implementation is available.</p>
     </body>
   </project>
@@ -1513,14 +1513,14 @@
 	<li>tumbler: 0.1.27 (add new option, COVER)</li>
 	<li>Parole: 0.5.0</li>
 	<li>xfdesktop: 4.10.2</li>
-	<li>Midori: 0.4.9 (full compatible with Vala 0.18), 0.5.0 is available
+	<li>Midori: 0.4.9 (fully compatible with Vala 0.18), 0.5.0 is available
 	  (see links)</li>
 	<li>Orage: 4.8.4</li>
 	<li>xfce4-terminal: 0.6.1 (renamed by upstream, previous name
 	 was Terminal)</li>
       </ul>
 
-      <p>This last application contains drop-down functionality, new
+      <p>This last application contains drop-down functionality: new
 	window slides down from the top of the screen when key (we can
 	define keyboard shortcut) is pressed.</p>
     </body>
@@ -1565,7 +1565,7 @@
 	mailing lists.</p>
 
       <p>There are some issues with Wine32 on &os;/amd64 —
-	possibly related to <tt>FreeBSD32_COMPACT</tt>, or other general
+	possibly related to <tt>FREEBSD32_COMPAT</tt>, or other general
 	32/64-bit issues — that could do with some focus.</p>
     </body>
 
@@ -1597,7 +1597,7 @@
     <body>
       <p>PyPy has been successfully updated to 2.0-beta1 with 2.0-beta2
 	finishing translating and other tests.  Many major changes were
-	made to the PyPy port fr the 2.0-beta1 release, these
+	made to the PyPy port from the 2.0-beta1 release, these
 	include:</p>
 
       <ul>
@@ -1607,7 +1607,7 @@
 	<li>Fix the test target.</li>
       </ul>
 
-      <p>Although the port is in a healthy state; PyPy on &os; has some
+      <p>Although the port is in a healthy state, PyPy on &os; has some
 	rough edges (see <tt>make test</tt> for examples of
 	roughness).</p>
     </body>
