svn commit: r42066 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview

Warren Block wblock at
Wed Jun 26 15:42:18 UTC 2013

Author: wblock
Date: Wed Jun 26 15:42:18 2013
New Revision: 42066

  Minor wording and formatting changes.


Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml	Wed Jun 26 15:40:23 2013	(r42065)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml	Wed Jun 26 15:42:18 2013	(r42066)
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
     <acronym>FDP</acronym>.  Willingness to contribute is the only
     membership requirement.</para>
-  <para>This Primer shows the reader how to:</para>
+  <para>This primer shows the reader how to:</para>
@@ -136,8 +136,8 @@
   <sect1 id="overview-quick-start">
     <title>Quick Start</title>
-    <para>Here we describe the steps contributors must follow before
-      they can make changes to the <acronym>FDP</acronym>.  New
+    <para>Here we describe the steps contributors must take before
+      making changes to the <acronym>FDP</acronym>.  New
       contributors will interact with other members of the &os;
       Documentation Team, which can assist in learning to use
       <acronym>XML</acronym> and the suggestions in
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@
 	    the type of documentation being edited will generate that
 	    documentation in split HTML format.  For example, to build
 	    the English version of the Handbook, type
-	    <userinput>make</userinput> in the
+	    <command>make</command> in the
 	    directory.  This step is necessary to make sure that the
 	    edits do not break the build.</para>

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