svn commit: r41999 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style

Warren Block wblock at FreeBSD.org
Sat Jun 22 02:27:35 UTC 2013


Author: wblock
Date: Sat Jun 22 02:27:34 2013
New Revision: 41999
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41999

Log:
  Improve the word list markup with brackets instead of CDATA, and add a
  non-breaking space to the Ports Collection example.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml	Fri Jun 21 21:41:48 2013	(r41998)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml	Sat Jun 22 02:27:34 2013	(r41999)
@@ -496,12 +496,12 @@ GB.  Hardware compression …</lite
 	<tbody>
 	  <row>
 	    <entry>CD-ROM</entry>
-	    <entry><literal><![CDATA[<acronym>CD-ROM</acronym>]]></literal></entry>
+	    <entry><literal><acronym>CD-ROM</acronym></literal></entry>
 	  </row>
 
 	  <row>
 	    <entry>DoS (Denial of Service)</entry>
-	    <entry><literal><![CDATA[<acronym>DoS</acronym>]]></literal></entry>
+	    <entry><literal><acronym>DoS</acronym></literal></entry>
 	  </row>
 
 	  <row>
@@ -534,6 +534,7 @@ GB.  Hardware compression …</lite
 
 	  <row>
 	    <entry>Ports Collection</entry>
+	    <entry>Ports&nbsp;Collection</entry>
 	  </row>
 
 	  <row>
@@ -546,7 +547,7 @@ GB.  Hardware compression …</lite
 
 	  <row>
 	    <entry>&unix;</entry>
-	    <entry><literal><![CDATA[&unix;]]></literal></entry>
+	    <entry><literal>&unix;</literal></entry>
 	  </row>
 
 	  <row>


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