svn commit: r41934 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview

Dru Lavigne dru at FreeBSD.org
Mon Jun 17 17:13:55 UTC 2013


Author: dru
Date: Mon Jun 17 17:13:54 2013
New Revision: 41934
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41934

Log:
  White space fix only, translators can ignore.
  
  Approved by:	bcr (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml	Mon Jun 17 15:47:47 2013	(r41933)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml	Mon Jun 17 17:13:54 2013	(r41934)
@@ -34,24 +34,27 @@
 <chapter id="overview">
   <title>Overview</title>
 
-  <para>Welcome to the &os; Documentation Project (<acronym>FDP</acronym>).  Quality
-    documentation is very important to the success of &os;.  Your contributions are very
+  <para>Welcome to the &os; Documentation Project
+    (<acronym>FDP</acronym>).  Quality documentation is very important
+    to the success of &os;.  Your contributions are very
     valuable.</para>
 
-  <para>This document's main purpose is to explain
-    how the <acronym>FDP</acronym> is organized, how to
-    write and submit documentation, and
-    how to effectively use the available tools.</para>
+  <para>This document's main purpose is to explain how the
+    <acronym>FDP</acronym> is organized, how to write and submit
+    documentation, and how to effectively use the available
+    tools.</para>
+
+  <para>Everyone is welcome to contribute to the
+    <acronym>FDP</acronym>.  There is no membership requirement or
+    minimum quota of documentation that needs to be produced.</para>
 
-  <para>Everyone is welcome to contribute to the <acronym>FDP</acronym>.  There is no membership requirement or minimum quota of
-    documentation that needs to be produced.</para>
-
-  <para>After you have finished reading this document you
-    will be able to:</para>
+  <para>After you have finished reading this document you will be
+    able to:</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>
-      <para>Identify which parts of &os; are maintained by the <acronym>FDP</acronym>.</para>
+      <para>Identify which parts of &os; are maintained by the
+	<acronym>FDP</acronym>.</para>
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
@@ -63,55 +66,57 @@
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para>Submit changes back for review and
-	eventual inclusion in the &os; documentation.</para>
+      <para>Submit changes back for review and eventual inclusion in
+	the &os; documentation.</para>
     </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>
 
   <sect1 id="overview-doc">
     <title>The &os; Documentation Set</title>
 
-    <para>The <acronym>FDP</acronym> is responsible for four categories of &os;
-      documentation.</para>
+    <para>The <acronym>FDP</acronym> is responsible for four
+      categories of &os; documentation.</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
 
-       <listitem>
-	  <para><emphasis>Handbook</emphasis>: The Handbook is the comprehensive online
-	    resource and reference for &os; users.</para>
+      <listitem>
+	<para><emphasis>Handbook</emphasis>: The Handbook is the
+	  comprehensive online resource and reference for &os;
+	  users.</para>
       </listitem>
-     
 
       <listitem>
-	<para><emphasis>FAQ</emphasis>: The <acronym>FAQ</acronym> uses a short question and answer
-	  format to address questions that are frequently asked on
-	  the various mailing lists and forums devoted to
-	  &os;.  This format does not permit long and
-	  comprehensive answers.</para>
+	<para><emphasis>FAQ</emphasis>: The <acronym>FAQ</acronym>
+	  uses a short question and answer format to address questions
+	  that are frequently asked on the various mailing lists and
+	  forums devoted to &os;.  This format does not permit long
+	  and comprehensive answers.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para><emphasis>Manual pages</emphasis>: The English language system manual pages are usually not
-	  written by the <acronym>FDP</acronym>, as they are part of the base system.
-	  However, the <acronym>FDP</acronym> can reword parts of existing
-	  manual pages to make them clearer or to correct
+	<para><emphasis>Manual pages</emphasis>: The English language
+	  system manual pages are usually not written by the
+	  <acronym>FDP</acronym>, as they are part of the base system.
+	  However, the <acronym>FDP</acronym> can reword parts of
+	  existing manual pages to make them clearer or to correct
 	  inaccuracies.</para>
-      </listitem>      
+      </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para><emphasis>Web site</emphasis>: This is the main &os; presence on the
-	  web, visible at <ulink
+	<para><emphasis>Web site</emphasis>: This is the main &os;
+	  presence on the web, visible at <ulink
 	    url="http://www.freebsd.org/index.html">http://www.FreeBSD.org/</ulink>
-	  and many mirrors around the world.  The web site is typically
-	  a new user's first exposure to &os;.</para>
-       </listitem>
+	  and many mirrors around the world.  The web site is
+	  typically a new user's first exposure to &os;.</para>
+      </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
     <para>Translation teams are responsible for translating
-      the Handbook and web site into different languages.  Manual pages are not translated.</para>
-	    
-    <para>Documentation source for the &os; web site, Handbook, and <acronym>FAQ</acronym>
-      is available in the Subversion
+      the Handbook and web site into different languages.  Manual
+      pages are not translated.</para>
+
+    <para>Documentation source for the &os; web site, Handbook, and
+      <acronym>FAQ</acronym> is available in the Subversion
       repository at
       <literal>https://svn.FreeBSD.org/doc/</literal>.</para>
 
@@ -120,65 +125,63 @@
       <literal>https://svn.FreeBSD.org/base/</literal>.</para>
 
     <para>The commit messages to the <acronym>FDP</acronym>
-      are visible to anyone using
-      <application>svn</application>. They are also archived at
-      &a.svn-doc-all.url;.</para>
+      are visible to anyone usingv<application>svn</application>.
+      They are also archived at &a.svn-doc-all.url;.</para>
 
     <para>In addition, many people have written tutorials or how-to
       articles about &os;.  Some are stored in the
-      <acronym>FDP</acronym>.  In other
-      cases, the author has decided to keep the documentation separate
-      from the <acronym>FDP</acronym>.  The
-      <acronym>FDP</acronym> endeavors to provide links to as much of this documentation
-      as possible.</para>
+      <acronym>FDP</acronym>.  In other cases, the author has decided
+      to keep the documentation separate from the
+      <acronym>FDP</acronym>.  The <acronym>FDP</acronym> endeavors to
+      provide links to as much of this documentation as
+      possible.</para>
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="overview-quick-start">
     <title>Quick Start</title>
 
     <para>This section outlines the steps which new contributors need
-      to follow before they can make changes to the <acronym>FDP</acronym>.  New contributors
-      will interact with other members of
-      the &os; Documentation Team which can assist in learning
-      how to use <acronym>XML</acronym> and the <xref
-	linkend="writing-style-guide"/>.  If
-      a new user contributes regularly, a Documentation Team member may be
-      assigned as a mentor to guide the user through the process from
-      contributor to documentation committer.</para>
+      to follow before they can make changes to the
+      <acronym>FDP</acronym>.  New contributors will interact with
+      other members of the &os; Documentation Team which can assist in
+      learning how to use <acronym>XML</acronym> and the <xref
+	linkend="writing-style-guide"/>.  If a new user contributes
+      regularly, a Documentation Team member may be assigned as a
+      mentor to guide the user through the process from contributor
+      to documentation committer.</para>
 
     <procedure>
       <step>
-	<para>
-	Subscribe to the &a.doc;.  Some members of the mailing
-	  list also interact on the <literal>#bsddocs</literal> <acronym>IRC</acronym>
-	  channel on <ulink
+	<para>Subscribe to the &a.doc;.  Some members of the mailing
+	  list also interact on the <literal>#bsddocs</literal>
+	  <acronym>IRC</acronym> channel on <ulink
 	    url="http://www.efnet.org/">EFnet</ulink>.</para>
-       </step>
+      </step>
 
-       <step>
+      <step>
 	<para>Install the
 	  <filename role="package">textproc/docproj</filename>
-	  package or port.  This meta-port
-	  installs all of the utilities needed by the <acronym>FDP</acronym>.</para>
-       </step>
+	  package or port.  This meta-port installs all of the
+	  utilities needed by the <acronym>FDP</acronym>.</para>
+      </step>
 
       <step>
 	<para>Install a local working copy of the documentation
 	  from a mirror of the &os; repository.  For the fastest
 	  download, pick the nearest mirror from the list of <ulink
-	    url="&url.books.handbook;/subversion-mirrors.html">Subversion mirror sites</ulink>.
-	  If <filename role="directory">/usr/doc</filename> already
-          exists, move or delete it first to prevent file
-          conflicts.</para>
+	    url="&url.books.handbook;/subversion-mirrors.html">Subversion
+	    mirror sites</ulink>.  If <filename
+	    role="directory">/usr/doc</filename> already exists, move
+	  or delete it first to prevent file conflicts.</para>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>svn checkout https://<replaceable>svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org</replaceable>/doc/head <replaceable>/usr/doc</replaceable></userinput></screen>
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
 	  <para>Before making any documentation edits, configure your
-	    editor to conform to <acronym>FDP</acronym> standards.  How to do so varies
-	    by editor.  Some editor configurations are listed in <xref
-	      linkend="writing-style"/>. The editor
+	    editor to conform to <acronym>FDP</acronym> standards.
+	    How to do so varies by editor.  Some editor configurations
+	    are listed in <xref linkend="writing-style"/>. The editor
 	    should be configured as follows:</para>
 	  <itemizedlist>
 	    <listitem>
@@ -192,96 +195,100 @@
 		single tab.</para>
 	    </listitem>
 	  </itemizedlist>
-      </step>
+	</step>
 
-      <step>
-	<para>Determine which file to edit.  Run <command>svn up</command> within the
-	    local working copy to make sure that it is
-	    current.  Before making major
+	<step>
+	  <para>Determine which file to edit.  Run
+	    <command>svn up</command> within the local working copy
+	    to make sure that it is current.  Before making major
 	    changes to a file, discuss the proposed changes first with
 	    the &a.doc;.</para>
 
-	<para>When making edits, determine which
-	    tags and entities are needed to achieve the desired
-	    formatting.  One way to learn is to compare some text in
-	    the <acronym>HTML</acronym> formatted version of the document to the tags
-	    which surround the text or the entities that represent
-	    that text in the <acronym>XML</acronym> file.  A
-	    reference to the commonly used tags and entities can be
+	  <para>When making edits, determine which tags and entities
+	    are needed to achieve the desired formatting.  One way to
+	    learn is to compare some text in the
+	    <acronym>HTML</acronym> formatted version of the document
+	    to the tags which surround the text or the entities that
+	    represent that text in the <acronym>XML</acronym> file.
+	    A reference to the commonly used tags and entities can be
 	    found in <xref linkend="xml-markup"/>.</para>
 	</step>
 
-	  <step>
-	    <para>Once the edits are complete, check for problems by running:</para>
+	<step>
+	  <para>Once the edits are complete, check for problems by
+	    running:</para>
 
 	  <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>igor -R filename.xml | less -RS</userinput></screen>
 
 	  <para>While reviewing the output, edit the file to fix the
 	    listed tab errors, spelling mistakes, and improper
 	    grammar.  Save the changes and rerun this command to find
-	    any remaining problems.  Repeat until all of the errors that
-	    you deem fixable are resolved.  If you get stuck trying to
-	    fix errors, ask for assistance on the &a.doc;.</para>
+	    any remaining problems.  Repeat until all of the errors
+	    that you deem fixable are resolved.  If you get stuck
+	    trying to fix errors, ask for assistance on the
+	    &a.doc;.</para>
 	</step>
 
-      <step>
-	<para><emphasis>Always</emphasis> build-test changes before submitting them.  By
-	    default, typing <userinput>make</userinput> in the
-	    top-level directory of the type of documentation being
-	    edited will generate that documentation in
-	    split HTML format.  For example, to build the English
-	    version of the Handbook, type <userinput>make</userinput>
-	    in the
+	<step>
+	  <para><emphasis>Always</emphasis> build-test changes before
+	    submitting them.  By default, typing
+	    <userinput>make</userinput> in the top-level directory of
+	    the type of documentation being edited will generate that
+	    documentation in split HTML format.  For example, to build
+	    the English version of the Handbook, type
+	    <userinput>make</userinput> in the
 	    <filename>en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/</filename>
 	    directory.  This step is necessary to make sure that the
 	    edits do not break the build.</para>
-      </step>
+	</step>
 
-      <step>
-	<para>In order to build the output in other formats,
-	    other <application>make</application> targets are defined
-	    in <filename>head/share/mk/doc.docbook.mk</filename>.
-	    Use quotes around the list of formats when
-	    building more than one format with a single
-	    command.</para>
+	<step>
+	  <para>In order to build the output in other formats, other
+	    <application>make</application> targets are defined in
+	    <filename>head/share/mk/doc.docbook.mk</filename>.  Use
+	    quotes around the list of formats when building more than
+	    one format with a single command.</para>
 
-	<para>For example, to convert the document to both
+	  <para>For example, to convert the document to both
 	    <literal>.html</literal> and <literal>.txt</literal>, use
 	    this command:</para>
 
 	  <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>make FORMATS="html txt"</userinput></screen>
 
-	<para>Once these steps are successfully completed,
-	    generate a <quote>diff file</quote> of the changes.  While in
-	    <filename class="directory">/usr/doc</filename>, run this
-	    command, replacing <replaceable>bsdinstall</replaceable>
-	    with the name of the directory containing the edits:</para>
+	<para>Once these steps are successfully completed, generate a
+	  <quote>diff file</quote> of the changes.  While in <filename
+	    class="directory">/usr/doc</filename>, run this command,
+	  replacing <replaceable>bsdinstall</replaceable> with the
+	  name of the directory containing the edits:</para>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>svn diff > <replaceable>bsdinstall</replaceable>.diff.txt</userinput></screen>
 	</step>
 
-      <step>
-	<para>Submit the diff file using the web-based <ulink
-	      url="&url.base;/support.html#gnats">Problem Report</ulink>
-	    system or with &man.send-pr.1;.  If using the web form,
-	    input a synopsis of <emphasis>[patch] <replaceable>short description of problem</replaceable></emphasis>.
-	    Select the category <literal>docs</literal> and the
-	    class <literal>doc-bug</literal>.  The body of the
-	    message should contain a short description of the edits
-	      and any important discussion points.  Use the <guibutton>[ Browse... ]</guibutton> button to attach the
-	    <literal>.diff.txt</literal> file and enter the captcha
-	    phrase.</para>
-
-	<para>It is important to remember that the <acronym>FDP</acronym>
-	    is comprised of volunteers who review
-	    edits in their spare time and who live in different time
-	    zones across the globe.  It takes time to review edits and
-	    to either commit them or respond if additional edits are
-	    required.  If you do not receive a response in a reasonable
-	    amount of time, send a follow-up email to the &a.doc; and ask if anyone
-	    has had a chance to review the patch or if additional
-	    information is required.</para>
+	<step>
+	  <para>Submit the diff file using the web-based <ulink
+	      url="&url.base;/support.html#gnats">Problem
+	      Report</ulink> system or with &man.send-pr.1;.  If using
+	    the web form, input a synopsis of <emphasis>[patch]
+	      <replaceable>short description of
+	      problem</replaceable></emphasis>.  Select the category
+	    <literal>docs</literal> and the class
+	    <literal>doc-bug</literal>.  The body of the message
+	    should contain a short description of the edits and any
+	    important discussion points.  Use the
+	    <guibutton>[ Browse... ]</guibutton> button to
+	    attach the <literal>.diff.txt</literal> file and enter
+	    the captcha phrase.</para>
+
+	  <para>It is important to remember that the
+	    <acronym>FDP</acronym> is comprised of volunteers who
+	    review edits in their spare time and who live in different
+	    time zones across the globe.  It takes time to review
+	    edits and to either commit them or respond if additional
+	    edits are required.  If you do not receive a response in a
+	    reasonable amount of time, send a follow-up email to the
+	    &a.doc; and ask if anyone has had a chance to review the
+	    patch or if additional information is required.</para>
 	</step>
       </procedure>
     </sect1>
-  </chapter>
+  </chapter>
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