svn commit: r41843 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/8.4R

Hiroki Sato hrs at FreeBSD.org
Wed Jun 5 10:32:13 UTC 2013


Author: hrs
Date: Wed Jun  5 10:32:13 2013
New Revision: 41843
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41843

Log:
  Fix various grammatical errors.
  
  Submitted by:	koobs

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/8.4R/relnotes-detailed.html

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/8.4R/relnotes-detailed.html
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/8.4R/relnotes-detailed.html	Wed Jun  5 02:59:45 2013	(r41842)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/8.4R/relnotes-detailed.html	Wed Jun  5 10:32:13 2013	(r41843)
@@ -649,7 +649,7 @@ target="_top">r240570</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ukbd&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ukbd</span>(4)</span></a> driver
-now supports 	 Microsoft Natural Egronomic Keyboard 4000. It had an issue 	 that
+now supports 	 Microsoft Natural Ergonomic Keyboard 4000. It had an issue 	 that
 function keys were not recognized.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=239426"
 target="_top">r239426</a>]</p>
@@ -746,7 +746,7 @@ target="_top">r238674</a>]</p>
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=snd_hda&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">snd_hda</span>(4)</span></a>
 driver 	 has been updated. It now supports and provides HDMI, new 	 volume
-control, automatic recording source selection, 	 runtime reconfiguration, more then 4
+control, automatic recording source selection, 	 runtime reconfiguration, more than 4
 PCM devices on a 	 controller, multichannel recording, additional 	
 playback/record streams, higher bandwidth, and more 	 informative device names.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236750"
@@ -797,22 +797,22 @@ target="_top">r246725</a>]</p>
 <p>Link state change handling in the 	 <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ale&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ale</span>(4)</span></a> network
-driver has been improved.[<a
+interface driver has been improved.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234127"
 target="_top">r234127</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ale&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ale</span>(4)</span></a> network
-driver now 	 supports flow control.[<a
+interface driver now 	 supports flow control.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234241"
 target="_top">r234241</a>]</p>
 
 <p>A bug in the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=bce&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">bce</span>(4)</span></a> network
-	 driver has been fixed. It could prevent jumbo frame 	 configuration from
-working.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235424"
+	 interface driver has been fixed. It could prevent jumbo frame 	 configuration
+from working.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235424"
 target="_top">r235424</a>]</p>
 
 <p>A bug in <a
@@ -826,18 +826,18 @@ target="_top">r236217</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=bce&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">bce</span>(4)</span></a> network
-driver now 	 supports remote PHYs, which allow the controller to perform 	 MDIO
-type accesses to a remote transceiver by using message 	 pages defined through MRBE
-(MultiRate Backplane 	 Ethernet). This is found on machines such as the Dell 	
-PowerEdge M610 Blade.[<a
+interface driver now 	 supports remote PHYs, which allow the controller to perform
+	 MDIO type accesses to a remote transceiver by using message 	 pages defined
+through MRBE (MultiRate Backplane 	 Ethernet). This is found on machines such as the
+Dell 	 PowerEdge M610 Blade.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235819"
 target="_top">r235819</a>]</p>
 
 <p>A bug in the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=bge&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">bge</span>(4)</span></a> network
-	 driver which could cause watchdog timeout on BCM5704 	 controller connected
-behind AMD 8131 PCI-X bridge has been 	 fixed.[<a
+	 interface driver which could cause watchdog timeout on BCM5704 	 controller
+connected behind AMD 8131 PCI-X bridge has been 	 fixed.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233496"
 target="_top">r233496</a>]</p>
 
@@ -865,7 +865,7 @@ could 	 make the device stop working
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236219"
 target="_top">r236219</a>]</p>
 
-<p>[amd64, i386, pc98] <a
+<p>[amd64, i386, pc98] The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=cas&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">cas</span>(4)</span></a>, 	 <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=gem&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
@@ -903,18 +903,18 @@ target="_top">r247430</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=fxp&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">fxp</span>(4)</span></a> network
-driver has 	 been improved. It does not cause unnecessary media change 	 in
-controller reconfiguration such as promiscuos mode 	 change which leads to an extra
-link 	 reestablishment.[<a
+interface driver has 	 been improved. It does not cause unnecessary media change
+	 in controller reconfiguration such as promiscuos mode 	 change which leads to
+an extra link 	 reestablishment.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233502"
 target="_top">r233502</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=igb&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">igb</span>(4)</span></a> network
-driver now 	 attempts to attach as many CPUs as possible to each queue. 	 If the
-number of CPUs are greater than or equal to the 	 number of queues, all of queues are
-bound to different 	 CPUs.[<a
+interface driver now 	 attempts to attach as many CPUs as possible to each queue.
+	 If the number of CPUs are greater than or equal to the 	 number of queues, all
+queues are bound to different 	 CPUs.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235616"
 target="_top">r235616</a>]</p>
 
@@ -942,8 +942,8 @@ target="_top">r247501</a>]</p>
 <p>A bug in <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ixgbe&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ixgbe</span>(4)</span></a> network
-	 driver has been fixed. It could cause a packet loss in 	 TCP communication when
-TSO (TCP Segmentation Offload) is 	 enabled.[<a
+	 interface driver has been fixed. It could cause packet loss in 	 TCP
+communication when TSO (TCP Segmentation Offload) is 	 enabled.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235666"
 target="_top">r235666</a>]</p>
 
@@ -964,7 +964,7 @@ target="_top">r248062</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ral&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ral</span>(4)</span></a> network
-driver now 	 supports Ralink RT2800 and RT3000 chipsets.[<a
+interface driver now 	 supports Ralink RT2800 and RT3000 chipsets.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236008"
 target="_top">r236008</a>]</p>
 
@@ -972,16 +972,17 @@ target="_top">r236008</a>]</p>
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=re&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE"><span
  class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">re</span>(4)</span></a> and 	 <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=rl&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE"><span
- class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">rl</span>(4)</span></a> network drivers
-which could cause a problem on 	 RTL8139 family has been fixed.[<a
+ class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">rl</span>(4)</span></a> network
+interface drivers which could cause a problem on 	 RTL8139 family has been fixed.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233490"
 target="_top">r233490</a>]</p>
 
 <p>A bug in the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=re&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE"><span
  class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">re</span>(4)</span></a> network 	
-driver which could cause intermittent link up/down on 	 RTL8169 controller has been
-fixed.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233493"
+interface driver which could cause intermittent link up/down on 	 RTL8169 controller
+has been fixed.[<a
+href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233493"
 target="_top">r233493</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
@@ -1008,23 +1009,24 @@ target="_top">r232594</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=run&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">run</span>(4)</span></a> network
-driver now 	 load the firmware upon initialization, not attachment. 	 This fixes
-an issue when the root filesystem is not 	 available at the time of the device
+interface driver now 	 loads the firmware upon initialization, not attachment. 	
+This fixes an issue when the root filesystem is not 	 available at the time of device
 detection.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233461"
 target="_top">r233461</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=run&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">run</span>(4)</span></a> driver
-has been 	 updated to firmware verion 0.236.[<a
+has been 	 updated to firmware version 0.236.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234029"
 target="_top">r234029</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sf&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE"><span
- class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sf</span>(4)</span></a> network driver
-has 	 been improved. A system load fluctuation under high network 	 load has been
-fixed.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233487"
+ class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sf</span>(4)</span></a> network
+interface driver has 	 been improved. System load fluctuation under high network
+	 load has been fixed.[<a
+href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233487"
 target="_top">r233487</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
@@ -1062,10 +1064,10 @@ target="_top">r242984</a>]</p>
 <hr />
 <h4 class="sect3"><a id="net-proto" name="net-proto">2.2.3 Network Protocols</a></h4>
 
-<p>The <a
+<p>Locking performance of the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=bpf&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
-<span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">bpf</span>(4)</span></a> Berkeley
-Packet Filter 	 has been improved in the locking performance.[<a
+<span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">bpf</span>(4)</span></a> 	
+Berkeley Packet Filter has been improved.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=247732"
 target="_top">r247732</a>]</p>
 
@@ -1073,8 +1075,8 @@ target="_top">r247732</a>]</p>
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=if_bridge&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">if_bridge</span>(4)</span></a>
 pseudo network 	 interface driver now supports multiple bridges in the same 	 STP
-domain. It used the same MAC address as the bridge ID 	 for all bridges on the
-system.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236056"
+domain. It used the same MAC address as the bridge ID 	 for all bridges on the system
+before.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236056"
 target="_top">r236056</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
@@ -1089,13 +1091,14 @@ target="_top">r236058</a>]</p>
 <p>The <code class="varname">net.link.bridge</code> 	 <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sysctl</span>(8)</span></a>
-variables can be set in <a
+variables can now be set in <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=loader&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">loader</span>(8)</span></a> and/or
 	 <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=loader.conf&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
-<span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">loader.conf</span>(5)</span></a>
-now.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236072"
+<span class="citerefentry"><span
+class="refentrytitle">loader.conf</span>(5)</span></a>.[<a
+href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236072"
 target="_top">r236072</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The default number of the bridge 	 forwarding cache entries of the <a
@@ -1127,8 +1130,7 @@ target="_top">r234637</a>]</p>
 
 <p><tt class="literal">IP_RECVTOS</tt> socket 	 option to receive for received
 UDP/IPv4 packets a cmsg of type 	 IP_RECVTOS which contains the TOS byte has been
-implemented. 	 This allows to implement a protocol on top of UDP and 	
-implementing ECN.[<a
+implemented. 	 This allows access to the ECN bits in a protocol on top of UDP.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=247944"
 target="_top">r247944</a>]</p>
 
@@ -1163,18 +1165,18 @@ class="filename">draft-gont-6man-ipv6-at
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=238495"
 target="_top">r238495</a>]</p>
 
-<p>A bug which could cause a system panic 	 in multicast routing in kernel with <code
-class="option">VIMAGE</code> 	 kernel option has been fixed. This option is disabled
-in 	 <tt class="filename">GENERIC</tt> kernel.[<a
+<p>A bug which could cause a system panic 	 in the multicast routing in kernel with
+<code class="option">VIMAGE</code> 	 kernel option has been fixed. This option is
+disabled in 	 <tt class="filename">GENERIC</tt> kernel.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233605"
 target="_top">r233605</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=lagg&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">lagg</span>(4)</span></a> pseudo
-network 	 driver now allows to set which layers are used for the load 	 balance
-hash calculation. It can be set in 	 <tt class="command">ifconfig lagghash</tt>
-option in a 	 comma-separated list. The default value is <code
+network 	 driver now allows the configuration of which layers are used for the load
+	 balance hash calculation. It can be set in 	 <tt class="command">ifconfig
+lagghash</tt> option in a 	 comma-separated list. The default value is <code
 class="option">lagghash 	 l2,l3,l4</code>. For more detail, see <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ifconfig&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ifconfig</span>(8)</span></a>
@@ -1224,9 +1226,10 @@ href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235056"
 target="_top">r235056</a>]</p>
 
-<p>A loader tunable 	 <code class="varname">net.fibs</code> now supports to specify
-the 	 number of routing tables. The <code class="option">ROUTETABLES</code> 	
-kernel option can still be used to set the default number of 	 routing tables.[<a
+<p>A loader tunable 	 <code class="varname">net.fibs</code> now supports to
+specifying the 	 number of routing tables. The <code
+class="option">ROUTETABLES</code> 	 kernel option can still be used to set the
+default number of 	 routing tables.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235104"
 target="_top">r235104</a>]</p>
 
@@ -1236,7 +1239,7 @@ href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi
 <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=stf&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">stf</span>(4)</span></a>
-interface.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233245"
+interfaces.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233245"
 target="_top">r233245</a>, <a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233246"
 target="_top">r233246</a>]</p>
@@ -1262,8 +1265,8 @@ target="_top">r232819</a>]</p>
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=tcp&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">tcp</span>(4)</span></a> host
 	 cache has been fixed. It could cause extra ICMP message 	 exchanges when an
-ICMP unreach is received but allocation of 	 the corresponding TCP host cache is
-failed.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235053"
+ICMP unreach is received but allocation of 	 the corresponding TCP host cache
+fails.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235053"
 target="_top">r235053</a>]</p>
 
 <p>A <a
@@ -1385,10 +1388,10 @@ class="varname">kern.cam.ada.send_ordere
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=247105"
 target="_top">r247105</a>]</p>
 
-<p>The <a
+<p>Performance of the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=da&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE"><span
- class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">da</span>(4)</span></a> driver has been
-	 improved in performance of subsequent 	 <tt class="literal">BIO_DELETE</tt>
+ class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">da</span>(4)</span></a> driver 	
+has been improved. It now handles subsequent 	 <tt class="literal">BIO_DELETE</tt>
 requests handled as a single 	 <tt class="literal">TRIM</tt> request.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234914"
 target="_top">r234914</a>]</p>
@@ -1403,7 +1406,7 @@ target="_top">r245941</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=hptiop&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">hptiop</span>(4)</span></a> driver
-has 	 bee updated to version 1.8 and now supports HighPoint 	 RocketRAID
+has 	 been updated to version 1.8 and now supports HighPoint 	 RocketRAID
 4500/4311/4310/4211/4210/3560/3530.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=239159"
 target="_top">r239159</a>, <a
@@ -1566,7 +1569,8 @@ target="_top">r243679</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=tmpfs&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">tmpfs</span>(5)</span></a>
-filesystem is not an 	 experimental implementation anymore.[<a
+filesystem is 	 production ready, and no longer considered an experimental 	
+implementation.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234512"
 target="_top">r234512</a>]</p>
 
@@ -1610,8 +1614,8 @@ target="_top">r247808</a>]</p>
 <p>Bugs in <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=msdosfs&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">msdosfs</span>(5)</span></a> 	
-which could fail a FAT32 filesystem to mount, create a 	 broken directory entry in a
-FAT32 filesystem, and prevent 	 <code class="option">sync</code> and <code
+which could cause mounting a FAT32 filesystem to fail, create a 	 broken directory
+entry in a FAT32 filesystem, and prevent 	 <code class="option">sync</code> and <code
 class="option">async</code> mount 	 option from working, have been fixed.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=246547"
 target="_top">r246547</a>, <a
@@ -1665,7 +1669,7 @@ target="_top">r232665</a>]</p>
 
 <p>FreeBSD ZFS subsystem has 	 been updated to support feature flags for ZFS pools
 (the SPA 	 version is 5000). Asynchronous destroy of ZFS dataset, LZ4 	
-compression, ZIO NOP-write optimization have been 	 implemented as new feature. <a
+compression, ZIO NOP-write optimization have been 	 implemented as new features. <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=loader&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">loader</span>(8)</span></a>
 tunables 	 <code class="varname">vfs.zfs.sync_pass_deferred_free</code>, 	 <code
@@ -1679,11 +1683,11 @@ target="_top">r244088</a>, <a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=247310"
 target="_top">r247310</a>]</p>
 
-<p>Note that this upgrade can cause interoperability issue 	 when upgrading a FreeBSD
-8.4 system to 9.0 or 9.1. This is 	 because FreeBSD 9.0 and 9.1 support SPA version
-28 and do not 	 recognize version 5000. To mitigate this issue, the default 	 SPA
-version for a newly created ZFS pool on FreeBSD 8.4 is set 	 to version 28. To create
-a ZFS pool with version 5000, use 	 <a
+<p>Note that this upgrade can cause interoperability issues 	 when upgrading a
+FreeBSD 8.4 system to 9.0 or 9.1. This is 	 because FreeBSD 9.0 and 9.1 support SPA
+version 28 and do not 	 recognize version 5000. To mitigate this issue, the default
+	 SPA version for a newly created ZFS pool on FreeBSD 8.4 is set 	 to version 28.
+To create a ZFS pool with version 5000, use 	 <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zpool&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">zpool</span>(8)</span></a> <tt
 class="command">upgrade</tt> command after the 	 creation.</p>
@@ -1717,8 +1721,8 @@ target="_top">r242991</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=chkgrp&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">chkgrp</span>(8)</span></a>
-utility now supports 	<code class="option">-q</code> flag to disable printing of text
-when the 	group format is correct.[<a
+utility now supports 	a <code class="option">-q</code> flag to disable printing of
+text when the 	group format is correct.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=244064"
 target="_top">r244064</a>]</p>
 
@@ -1738,7 +1742,7 @@ target="_top">r239877</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=cut&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">cut</span>(1)</span></a> utility
-now supports 	<code class="option">-w</code> flag to specify whitespace as the
+now supports 	a <code class="option">-w</code> flag to specify whitespace as the
 	delimiter.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=244305"
 target="_top">r244305</a>]</p>
@@ -1759,15 +1763,15 @@ target="_top">r242642</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=daemon&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">daemon</span>(8)</span></a>
-utility now supports 	<code class="option">-r</code> flag to restart the program if
-it has been 	terminated.[<a
+utility now supports 	an <code class="option">-r</code> flag to restart the program
+if it has been 	terminated.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233762"
 target="_top">r233762</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=devd&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">devd</span>(8)</span></a> daemon
-now supports 	<tt class="literal">!</tt> character in regex matching in 	<a
+now supports 	the <tt class="literal">!</tt> character in regex matching in 	<a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=devd.conf&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">devd.conf</span>(5)</span></a>. It
 inverts the logic of the 	matching.[<a
@@ -1790,7 +1794,7 @@ target="_top">r233867</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=du&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE"><span
  class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">du</span>(1)</span></a> utility now
-supports 	<code class="option">-g</code> flag to display the results in
+supports 	a <code class="option">-g</code> flag to display the results in
 	gigabytes.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=247539"
 target="_top">r247539</a>]</p>
@@ -1798,11 +1802,11 @@ target="_top">r247539</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=fetch&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">fetch</span>(1)</span></a> utility
-now supports 	percent-encoded string in user and password component of a 	URL.[<a
-href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235254"
+now supports 	percent-encoded strings in user and password component of a
+	URL.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235254"
 target="_top">r235254</a>]</p>
 
-<p>The maximum number of HTTP redirection 	has been increased from <tt
+<p>The maximum number of HTTP redirections 	has been increased from <tt
 class="literal">5</tt> to 	<tt class="literal">20</tt> in the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=fetch&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">fetch</span>(1)</span></a>
@@ -1812,14 +1816,14 @@ target="_top">r242034</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=fetch&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">fetch</span>(1)</span></a> utility
-now 	supports HTTP status code <tt class="literal">305</tt> (Use Proxy) 	and <tt
+now 	supports HTTP status codes <tt class="literal">305</tt> (Use Proxy) 	and <tt
 class="literal">308</tt> (Permanent Redirect).[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=242288"
 target="_top">r242288</a>, <a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=242291"
 target="_top">r242291</a>]</p>
 
-<p>A countermeasure against a possible DoS 	(Denial of Service) attack described in
+<p>A countermeasure against possible DoS 	(Denial of Service) attack described in
 CVE-2010-2632 in the 	<a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ftpd&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ftpd</span>(8)</span></a> daemon
@@ -1838,10 +1842,10 @@ target="_top">r235084</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ifconfig&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ifconfig</span>(8)</span></a> now
-supports 	<code class="varname">state</code> option for <a
+supports a 	<code class="option">state</code> option for <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=carp&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">carp</span>(4)</span></a> protocol
-to 	set the state of a carp cluster. The valid keywords are 	<tt
+to 	set the state of a carp cluster. Valid state keywords are 	<tt
 class="literal">master</tt> and 	<tt class="literal">backup</tt>.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=243466"
 target="_top">r243466</a>]</p>
@@ -1880,7 +1884,7 @@ target="_top">r237790</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=lastcomm&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">lastcomm</span>(1)</span></a>
-utility now 	supports <code class="option">+<tt
+utility now 	supports a <code class="option">+<tt
 class="replaceable"><i>format</i></tt></code> 	option to specify <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=strftime&sektion=3&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">strftime</span>(3)</span></a>
@@ -1895,13 +1899,13 @@ target="_top">r237739</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <b class="application">libpmc</b> 	library has been updated to support more
 PMCs (Performance 	Monitoring Counters) in Intel Core i7 and Xeon 5500 family
-	based on Intel documentatino as of October 2011. 	Specifically, <tt
+	based on Intel documentation as of October 2011. 	Specifically, <tt
 class="literal">DTLB_MISSES.PDE_MISS</tt> and 	<tt
 class="literal">DTLB_MISSES.LARGE_WALK_COMPLETED</tt> have been 	added.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234045"
 target="_top">r234045</a>]</p>
 
-<p>The <b class="application">libradius</b> 	now supports <a
+<p>The <b class="application">libradius</b> 	now supports the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=rad_bind_to&sektion=3&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">rad_bind_to</span>(3)</span></a>
 function.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234555"
@@ -1910,7 +1914,7 @@ target="_top">r234555</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=libusb&sektion=3&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">libusb</span>(3)</span></a>
-library now supports 	<a
+library now supports 	a <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=libusb_get_max_iso_packet_size&sektion=3&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span
 class="refentrytitle">libusb_get_max_iso_packet_size</span>(3)</span></a> function.[<a
@@ -1941,15 +1945,15 @@ target="_top">r241368</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=mktemp&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">mktemp</span>(1)</span></a>
-utility now uses 	<tt class="filename">tmp</tt> as the default prefix when no
-	<code class="option">-t</code> is specified.[<a
+utility now uses 	<tt class="filename">tmp</tt> as the default prefix when 	<code
+class="option">-t</code> is not specified.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=241422"
 target="_top">r241422</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=mv&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE"><span
  class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">mv</span>(1)</span></a> utility now
-supports 	<code class="option">-h</code> flag. This forces it to treat a symbolic
+supports a 	<code class="option">-h</code> flag. This forces it to treat a symbolic
 	link to a directory for the target as a symbolic instead of a 	directory.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=241321"
 target="_top">r241321</a>]</p>
@@ -1986,7 +1990,7 @@ Reporting 	(AER).[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=237732"
 target="_top">r237732</a>]</p>
 
-<p>A workaround has been implemented in 	<a
+<p>A workaround has been implemented in 	the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ppp&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ppp</span>(8)</span></a> daemon to
 support some 3G modems which return a 	wrong signature in echo packets and make it
@@ -2103,7 +2107,7 @@ target="_top">r241969</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=syslogd&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">syslogd</span>(8)</span></a>
-daemon now supports 	IPv6 address as destination address in 	<a
+daemon now supports 	IPv6 destination address in 	<a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=syslog.conf&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span
 class="refentrytitle">syslog.conf</span>(5)</span></a>.[<a
@@ -2120,7 +2124,7 @@ target="_top">r243684</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=tcpdrop&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">tcpdrop</span>(8)</span></a>
-utility now accepts 	the address and ports to be separated by a colon or period
+utility now allows 	addresses and ports to be separated by a colon or period
 	rather than a space to permit directly pasting the output of 	commands such as
 netstat and sockstat on the command 	line.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=247563"
@@ -2158,23 +2162,22 @@ target="_top">r235015</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=usbhidctl&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">usbhidctl</span>(1)</span></a>
-utility now 	supports <code class="option">-z</code> flag for reading operation. It
+utility now 	supports a <code class="option">-z</code> flag for reading operation. It
 	allows to not request current values from the device, but only 	receive
 changes.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235881"
 target="_top">r235881</a>]</p>
 
-<p>The <a
+<p>Performance of the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zfs&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
-<span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> <tt
-class="command">list -t 	 snapshot</tt> command has been improved dramatically in
-	performance.[<a
+<span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> 	<tt
+class="command">list -t snapshot</tt> command has been 	dramatically improved.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233862"
 target="_top">r233862</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zfs&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> <tt
-class="command">get</tt> 	command now supports <code class="option">-t 	<tt
+class="command">get</tt> 	command now supports a <code class="option">-t 	<tt
 class="replaceable"><i>datatype</i></tt></code> option.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233862"
 target="_top">r233862</a>]</p>
@@ -2183,7 +2186,7 @@ target="_top">r233862</a>]</p>
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zfs&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> <tt
 class="command">jail</tt> 	and <tt class="command">unjail</tt> commands now support
-	<tt class="literal">jailnames</tt> and 	<tt class="literal">jailid</tt>.[<a
+	a jail name as well as a jail ID.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=246750"
 target="_top">r246750</a>]</p>
 
@@ -2198,8 +2201,8 @@ target="_top">r235952</a>]</p>
 <p>Changing <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zfs&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> 	<tt
-class="literal">canmount</tt> property to <tt class="literal">on</tt> 	when dataset
-is already mounted does not cause remount of the 	ZFS dataset now.[<a
+class="literal">canmount</tt> property to <tt class="literal">on</tt> 	no longer
+causes remount of the 	ZFS dataset when a dataset is already mounted.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=237457"
 target="_top">r237457</a>]</p>
 
@@ -2215,7 +2218,7 @@ output and could prevent redirection fro
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=232549"
 target="_top">r232549</a>]</p>
 
-<p>The <tt class="filename">rc.d/jail</tt> 	 script now supports <code
+<p>The <tt class="filename">rc.d/jail</tt> 	 script now supports a <code
 class="varname">jail_parameters</code> 	 variable to specify extra parameters for
 each jail.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=242083"
 target="_top">r242083</a>]</p>
@@ -2223,8 +2226,8 @@ target="_top">r242083</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=service&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">service</span>(8)</span></a>
-utility now 	 supports <code class="option">-R</code> flag to restart all third party
-	 services in <tt class="filename">/usr/local/etc/rc.d</tt>.[<a
+utility now 	 supports an <code class="option">-R</code> flag to restart all third
+party 	 services in <tt class="filename">/usr/local/etc/rc.d</tt>.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=246609"
 target="_top">r246609</a>]</p>
 </div>
@@ -2304,7 +2307,7 @@ target="_top">r239563</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=pkg_add&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">pkg_add</span>(1)</span></a>
-utility now suports 	<code class="varname">PACKAGESUFFIX</code> to specify extension
+utility now supports 	<code class="varname">PACKAGESUFFIX</code> to specify extension
 in a 	package filename.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=240674"
 target="_top">r240674</a>]</p>


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