svn commit: r42204 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status

Tue Jul 9 07:11:15 UTC 2013

Author: pgj
Date: Tue Jul  9 07:11:14 2013
New Revision: 42204
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42204

Log:
  - Minor wording improvements for the ARM superpages report
  
  Submitted by:	emaste, Zbyszek Bodek

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml	Tue Jul  9 07:05:19 2013	(r42203)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml	Tue Jul  9 07:11:14 2013	(r42204)
@@ -658,11 +658,12 @@
     </links>
 
     <body>
-      <p>The ARM architecture is more and more prevalent, not only in
-	the mobile and embedded space.  Among the more interesting
-	industry trends emerging in the recent months, there has been
-	the concept of "ARM server".  Some top-tier companies, e.g.
-	Dell and HP, have already started to develop such systems.</p>
+      <p>The ARM architecture is becoming more and more prevalent, with
+	increasing usage beyond the mobile and embedded space.  Among
+	the more interesting industry trends emerging in the recent
+	months, there has been the concept of "ARM server".  Some
+	top-tier companies, e.g.  Dell and HP, have already started to
+	develop such systems.</p>
 
       <p>Key to success of &os; in these new areas is dealing with the
 	sophisticated features of the platform, for example adding
@@ -696,7 +697,7 @@
       </ul>
 
       <p>This project is jointly sponsored by The &os; Foundation and
-	Semihalf sp.j.</p>
+	Semihalf.</p>
     </body>
 
     <help>
