svn commit: r42122 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status

Wed Jul 3 06:21:44 UTC 2013

Author: pgj
Date: Wed Jul  3 06:21:44 2013
New Revision: 42122
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42122

Log:
  - Fixes in the Q2 DocBook entry
  
  Submitted by:	bjk, wblock

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml	Wed Jul  3 00:00:54 2013	(r42121)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml	Wed Jul  3 06:21:44 2013	(r42122)
@@ -425,29 +425,29 @@
     </contact>
 
     <body>
-      <p>The Documentation Project has been behind with the used
-	standards until recently when we switched to a real XML toolchain
-	and DocBook 4.5.  However, we still depend on obsoleted
+      <p>The Documentation Project has been using old versions of markup
+	standards until recently when we switched to a real XML
+	toolchain and DocBook 4.5.  However, we still depend on obsolete
 	technologies — DSSSL and Jade.  Besides, DocBook 5.0
-	provides a cleaner markup and some nice new features.</p>
+	provides cleaner markup and some nice new features.</p>
 
       <p>The objective of this project is to upgrade the documentation
 	set to DocBook 5.0 and to find a way to properly render our
-	sources without using DSSSL since the DSSSL stylesheets are
+	sources without using DSSSL, since the DSSSL stylesheets are
 	discontinued and cannot render DocBook 5.0.  The documentation
 	sources have already been successfully transformed to DocBook
-	5.0 and the development of the rendering process is under
+	5.0 and updates to the rendering process are under
 	development.  The common opinion among &os; developers is that
 	Java is a heavy dependency that should be avoided.  This has
 	suggested the transformation of DocBook sources to TeX and use
 	TeX as a rendering backend.  There are two ways to do this; the
 	sources can be transformed either directly or through the XSL FO
-	output generated by the stylesheets that the DocBook Project
-	provides.  The latter approach has been chosen as a preferred
+	output generated by the stylesheets provided for the DocBook Project.
+	The latter approach has been chosen as a preferred
 	way since it better fits the existing documentation
 	infrastructure and provides easier customization.</p>
 
-      <p>This project is generously founded by The &os; Foundation.</p>
+      <p>This project is generously funded by The &os; Foundation.</p>
     </body>
 
     <help>
