svn commit: r40822 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports

Dru Lavigne dru at FreeBSD.org
Wed Jan 30 14:39:05 UTC 2013


Author: dru
Date: Wed Jan 30 14:39:04 2013
New Revision: 40822
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40822

Log:
  This patch addresses the following:
  
  - fixes missing &os; entities
  - fixes most redundancy--this required general rewording and
    tightening
  - more general tightening and rewording to remove most instances of
   "you"
  - a few title fixes
  - imake section was removed as this is a ports maintainer issue
    which should not be an end-user problem
  - reword incorrect usage of pkg_install (this comes with pkgng, not
    traditional system)
  
  Approved by:  bcr (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	Wed Jan 30 14:36:55 2013	(r40821)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	Wed Jan 30 14:39:04 2013	(r40822)
@@ -13,46 +13,43 @@
 
     <indexterm><primary>ports</primary></indexterm>
     <indexterm><primary>packages</primary></indexterm>
-    <para>FreeBSD is bundled with a rich collection of system tools as
+    <para>&os; is bundled with a rich collection of system tools as
       part of the base system.  However, there is only so much one can
       do before needing to install an additional third-party
-      application to get real work done.  FreeBSD provides two
-      complementary technologies for installing third-party software
-      on your system: the FreeBSD Ports Collection (for installing
-      from source), and packages (for installing from pre-built
-      binaries).  Either method may be used to install the newest
-      version of your favorite applications from local media or
-      straight off the network.</para>
+      application to get real work done.  &os; provides two
+      complementary technologies for installing third-party software:
+      the &os; Ports Collection (for installing from source), and
+      packages (for installing from pre-built binaries).  Either
+      method may be used to install software from local media or
+      from the network.</para>
 
-    <para>After reading this chapter, you will know:</para>
+    <para>After reading this chapter, you will know how to:</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-	<para>How to install third-party binary software
-	  packages.</para>
+	<para>Install third-party binary software packages.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>How to build third-party software from source by using
-	  the ports collection.</para>
+	<para>Build third-party software from source by using the
+	  Ports Collection.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>How to remove previously installed packages or
-	  ports.</para>
+	<para>Remove previously installed packages or ports.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>How to override the default values that the ports
-	  collection uses.</para>
+	<para>Override the default values used by the Ports
+	  Collection.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>How to find the appropriate software package.</para>
+	<para>Find the appropriate software package.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>How to upgrade your applications.</para>
+	<para>Upgrade installed software.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect1>
@@ -60,9 +57,8 @@
   <sect1 id="ports-overview">
     <title>Overview of Software Installation</title>
 
-    <para>If you have used a &unix; system before you will know that
-      the typical procedure for installing third-party software goes
-      something like this:</para>
+    <para>The typical steps for installing third-party software on a
+      &unix; system include:</para>
 
     <procedure>
       <step>
@@ -77,11 +73,10 @@
       </step>
 
       <step>
-	<para>Locate the documentation (perhaps an
-	  <filename>INSTALL</filename> or <filename>README</filename>
-	  file, or some files in a <filename>doc/</filename>
-	  subdirectory) and read up on how to install the
-	  software.</para>
+	<para>Locate the documentation in
+	  <filename>INSTALL</filename>, <filename>README</filename>
+	  or some file in a <filename>doc/</filename> subdirectory and
+	  read up on how to install the software.</para>
       </step>
 
       <step>
@@ -96,59 +91,40 @@
       </step>
     </procedure>
 
-    <para>And that is only if everything goes well.  If you are
-      installing a software package that was not deliberately ported
-      to FreeBSD you may even have to go in and edit the code to make
-      it work properly.</para>
-
-    <para>Should you want to, you can continue to install software the
-      <quote>traditional</quote> way with FreeBSD.  However, FreeBSD
-      provides two technologies which can save you a lot of effort:
-      packages and ports.  At the time of writing, over &os.numports;
-      third-party applications have been made available in this
-      way.</para>
-
-    <para>For any given application, the FreeBSD package for that
-      application is a single file which you must download.  The
-      package contains pre-compiled copies of all the commands for the
-      application, as well as any configuration files or
-      documentation.  A downloaded package file can be manipulated
-      with FreeBSD package management commands, such as
-      &man.pkg.add.1;, &man.pkg.delete.1;, &man.pkg.info.1;, and so
-      on.  Installing a new application can be carried out with a
-      single command.</para>
-
-    <para>A FreeBSD port for an application is a collection of files
-      designed to automate the process of compiling an application
-      from source code.</para>
-
-    <para>Remember that there are a number of steps you would normally
-      carry out if you compiled a program yourself (downloading,
-      unpacking, patching, compiling, installing).  The files that
-      make up a port contain all the necessary information to allow
-      the system to do this for you.  You run a handful of simple
-      commands and the source code for the application is
-      automatically downloaded, extracted, patched, compiled, and
-      installed for you.</para>
-
-    <para>In fact, the ports system can also be used to generate
-      packages which can later be manipulated with
-      <command>pkg_add</command> and the other package management
-      commands that will be introduced shortly.</para>
+    <para>If you are installing a software package that was not
+      deliberately ported to &os; you may even have to go in and edit
+      the code to make it work properly.</para>
+
+    <para>&os; provides two technologies which perform these steps for
+      you.  At the time of writing, over &os.numports; third-party
+      applications are available.</para>
+
+    <para>A &os; package contains pre-compiled copies of all the
+      commands for an application, as well as any configuration files
+      and documentation.  A package can be manipulated with &os;
+      package management commands, such as &man.pkg.add.1;,
+      &man.pkg.delete.1;, and &man.pkg.info.1;.</para>
+
+    <para>A &os; port is a collection of files designed to automate
+      the process of compiling an application from source code.  The
+      files that comprise a port contain all the necessary information
+      to automatically download, extract, patch, compile, and install
+      the application.</para>
+
+    <para>The ports system can also be used to generate packages which
+      can be manipulated with the &os; package management
+      commands.</para>
 
     <para>Both packages and ports understand
-      <emphasis>dependencies</emphasis>.  Suppose you want to install
-      an application that depends on a specific library being
-      installed.  Both the application and the library have been made
-      available as FreeBSD ports and packages.  If you use the
-      <command>pkg_add</command> command or the ports system to add
-      the application, both will notice that the library has not been
-      installed, and automatically install the library first.</para>
-
-    <para>Given that the two technologies are quite similar, you might
-      be wondering why FreeBSD bothers with both.  Packages and ports
-      both have their own strengths, and which one you use will depend
-      on your own preference.</para>
+      <emphasis>dependencies</emphasis>. If &man.pkg.add.1; or the
+      Ports Collection is used to install an application and a
+      dependent library is not already installed, the library will
+      automatically be installaed first.</para>
+
+    <para>While the two technologies are quite similar, packages and
+      ports each have their own strengths.  Select the technology that
+      meets your requirements for installing a particular
+      application.</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <title>Package Benefits</title>
@@ -160,17 +136,17 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>Packages do not require any additional compilation.  For
-	  large applications, such as
+	<para>Packages do not require compilation time.  For large
+	  applications, such as
 	  <application>Mozilla</application>,
 	  <application>KDE</application>, or
 	  <application>GNOME</application> this can be important,
-	  particularly if you are on a slow system.</para>
+	  on a slow system.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
 	<para>Packages do not require any understanding of the process
-	  involved in compiling software on FreeBSD.</para>
+	  involved in compiling software on &os;.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -179,105 +155,89 @@
 
       <listitem>
 	<para>Packages are normally compiled with conservative
-	  options, because they have to run on the maximum number of
-	  systems.  By installing from the port, you can tweak the
-	  compilation options to (for example) generate code that is
-	  specific to a Pentium 4 or Athlon processor.</para>
+	  options because they have to run on the maximum number of
+	  systems.  By compiling from the port, one can change the
+	  compilation options.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
 	<para>Some applications have compile-time options relating to
-	  what they can and cannot do.  For example,
+	  which features are installed.  For example,
 	  <application>Apache</application> can be configured with a
-	  wide variety of different built-in options.  By building
-	  from the port you do not have to accept the default options,
-	  and can set them yourself.</para>
+	  wide variety of different built-in options.</para>
 
 	<para>In some cases, multiple packages will exist for the same
 	  application to specify certain settings.  For example,
 	  <application>Ghostscript</application> is available as a
 	  <filename>ghostscript</filename> package and a
 	  <filename>ghostscript-nox11</filename> package, depending on
-	  whether or not you have installed an X11 server.  This sort
-	  of rough tweaking is possible with packages, but rapidly
-	  becomes impossible if an application has more than one or
-	  two different compile-time options.</para>
+	  whether or not <application>Xorg</application> is installed.
+	  Creating multiple packages rapidly becomes impossible if an
+	  application has more than one or two different compile-time
+	  options.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>The licensing conditions of some software distributions
-	  forbid binary distribution.  They must be distributed as
-	  source code.</para>
+	<para>The licensing conditions of some software forbid binary
+	  distribution.  These must be distributed as source code
+	  which must be compiled by the end-user.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>Some people do not trust binary distributions.  At least
-	  with source code, you can (in theory) read through it and
-	  look for potential problems yourself.</para>
+	<para>Some people do not trust binary distributions or prefer
+	  to read through source code in order to look for potential
+	  problems.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
 	<para>If you have local patches, you will need the source in
 	  order to apply them.</para>
       </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>Some people like having code around, so they can read it
-	  if they get bored, hack it, borrow from it (license
-	  permitting, of course), and so on.</para>
-      </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
     <para>To keep track of updated ports, subscribe to the
       &a.ports; and the &a.ports-bugs;.</para>
 
     <warning>
-      <para>Before installing any application, you should check <ulink
+      <para>Before installing any application, check <ulink
 	  url="http://vuxml.freebsd.org/"></ulink> for security issues
-	related to your application.</para>
-
-      <para>You can also install
-	<filename role="package">ports-mgmt/portaudit</filename>
-	which will automatically check all installed applications for
-	known vulnerabilities; a check will be also performed before
-	any port build.  Meanwhile, you can use the command
-	<command>portaudit -F -a</command> after you have installed
-	some packages.</para>
+	related to the application or install  <filename
+	  role="package">ports-mgmt/portaudit</filename>. Once
+	installed, type <command>portaudit -F -a</command> to check
+	all installed applications for known vulnerabilities</para>
     </warning>
 
-    <para>The remainder of this chapter will explain how to use
-      packages and ports to install and manage third-party software on
-      FreeBSD.</para>
+    <para>The remainder of this chapter explains how to use packages
+      and ports to install and manage third-party software on
+      &os;.</para>
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="ports-finding-applications">
-    <title>Finding Your Application</title>
+    <title>Finding Software</title>
 
-    <para>Before you can install any applications you need to know
-      what you want, and what the application is called.</para>
-
-    <para>FreeBSD's list of available applications is growing all the
-      time.  Fortunately, there are a number of ways to find what you
-      want:</para>
+    <para>&os;'s list of available applications is growing all the
+      time.  There are a number of ways to find software to
+      install:</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-	<para>The FreeBSD web site maintains an up-to-date searchable
+	<para>The &os; web site maintains an up-to-date searchable
 	  list of all the available applications, at <ulink
 	    url="&url.base;/ports/index.html">http://www.FreeBSD.org/ports/</ulink>.
-	  The ports are divided into categories, and you may either
-	  search for an application by name (if you know it), or see
-	  all the applications available in a category.</para>
+	  The ports can be searched by application name or by
+	  software category.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
 	<indexterm><primary>FreshPorts</primary></indexterm>
 
-	<para>Dan Langille maintains FreshPorts, at <ulink
-	    url="http://www.FreshPorts.org/"></ulink>.  FreshPorts
-	  tracks changes to the applications in the ports tree as they
-	  happen, allows you to <quote>watch</quote> one or more
-	  ports, and can send you email when they are updated.</para>
+	<para>Dan Langille maintains <ulink
+	    url="http://www.FreshPorts.org/">FreshPorts</ulink> which
+	  provides a comprehensive search utility and also tracks
+	  changes to the applications in the Ports Collection.
+	  Registered users can create a customized watch list in order
+	  to receive an automated email when their watched ports are
+	  updated.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
@@ -286,32 +246,21 @@
 	<para>If you do not know the name of the application you want,
 	  try using a site like Freecode (<ulink
 	    url="http://www.freecode.com/"></ulink>) to find an
-	  application, then check back at the FreeBSD site to see if
+	  application, then check back at the &os; site to see if
 	  the application has been ported yet.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>If you know the exact name of the port, but just need to
-	  find out which category it is in, you can use the
-	  &man.whereis.1; command.  Simply type
+	<para>To find out which category a port is in, type
 	  <command>whereis <replaceable>file</replaceable></command>,
-	  where <replaceable>file</replaceable> is the program you
-	  want to install.  If it is found on your system, you will be
-	  told where it is, as follows:</para>
+	  where <replaceable>file</replaceable> is the program to be
+	  installed:</para>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>whereis lsof</userinput>
 lsof: /usr/ports/sysutils/lsof</screen>
 
-	<para>This tells us that <command>lsof</command> (a system
-	  utility) can be found in the
-	  <filename>/usr/ports/sysutils/lsof</filename>
-	  directory.</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-	<para>Additionally, you can use a simple &man.echo.1;
-	  statement to find where a port exists in the ports tree.
-	  For example:</para>
+	<para>Alternately, a &man.echo.1; statement can be
+	  used:</para>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>echo /usr/ports/*/*lsof*</userinput>
 /usr/ports/sysutils/lsof</screen>
@@ -323,15 +272,15 @@ lsof: /usr/ports/sysutils/lsof</screen>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>Yet another way to find a particular port is by using
-	  the Ports Collection's built-in search mechanism.  To use
-	  the search feature, you will need to be in the
-	  <filename>/usr/ports</filename> directory.  Once in that
-	  directory, run <command>make <maketarget>search</maketarget>
-	  name=<replaceable>program-name</replaceable></command> where
-	  <replaceable>program-name</replaceable> is the name of the
-	  program you want to find.  For example, if you were looking
-	  for <command>lsof</command>:</para>
+	<para>Another way to find software is by using the Ports
+	  Collection's built-in search mechanism.  To use
+	    the search feature, <application>cd</application> to
+	  <filename>/usr/ports</filename> then run <command>make
+	    <maketarget>search</maketarget>
+	    name=<replaceable>program-name</replaceable></command>
+	  where <replaceable>program-name</replaceable> is the name of
+	  the software.  For example,to search for
+	  <command>lsof</command>:</para>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/ports</userinput>
 &prompt.root; <userinput>make search name=lsof</userinput>
@@ -343,18 +292,11 @@ Index:  sysutils
 B-deps:
 R-deps: </screen>
 
-	<para>The part of the output you want to pay particular
-	  attention to is the <quote>Path:</quote> line, since that
-	  tells you where to find the port.  The other information
-	  provided is not needed in order to install the port, so it
-	  will not be covered here.</para>
-
-	<para>Alternatively, there is another search feature from
-	  ports that achieves the same purpose but with less noise,
-	  the <command>quicksearch</command> feature.  This feature
-	  accepts the same parameter as the <command>search</command>
-	  feature.  For example, searching for <command>lsof</command>
-	  would return:</para>
+	<para>The <quote>Path:</quote> line indicates where to find
+	  the port.</para>
+
+	<para>To receive less information, use the
+	  <command>quicksearch</command> feature:</para>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/ports</userinput>
 &prompt.root; <userinput>make quicksearch name=lsof</userinput>
@@ -362,19 +304,18 @@ Port:   lsof-4.87.a,7
 Path:   /usr/ports/sysutils/lsof
 Info:   Lists information about open files (similar to fstat(1))</screen>
 
-	<para>For more in-depth searching you can also use
+	<para>For more in-depth searching, use
 	  <command>make <maketarget>search</maketarget>
 	  key=<replaceable>string</replaceable></command> or
 	  <command>make <maketarget>quicksearch</maketarget>
 	  key=<replaceable>string</replaceable></command>, where
 	  <replaceable>string</replaceable> is some text to search
-	  for.  This searches port names, comments, descriptions and
-	  dependencies and can be used to find ports which relate to a
-	  particular subject if you do not know the name of the
-	  program you are looking for.</para>
+	  for.  The text can be comments, descriptions or dependencies
+	  in order to find ports which relate to a particular subject
+	  when the name of the program is unknown.</para>
 
-	<para>In both of these cases (<maketarget>search</maketarget>
-	  and <maketarget>quicksearch</maketarget>), the search string
+	<para>When using (<maketarget>search</maketarget> and
+	  <maketarget>quicksearch</maketarget>), the search string
 	  is case-insensitive.  Searching for <quote>LSOF</quote> will
 	  yield the same results as searching for
 	  <quote>lsof</quote>.</para>
@@ -394,10 +335,10 @@ Info:   Lists information about open fil
     <!-- 30 Mar 2001 -->
     </sect1info>
 
-    <title>Using the Packages System</title>
+    <title>Using Binary Packages</title>
 
     <para>There are several different tools used to manage packages on
-      FreeBSD:</para>
+      &os;:</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
@@ -424,9 +365,8 @@ Info:   Lists information about open fil
       <indexterm>
 	<primary><command>pkg_add</command></primary>
       </indexterm>
-      <para>You can use the &man.pkg.add.1; utility to install a
-	FreeBSD software package from a local file or from a server on
-	the network.</para>
+      <para>Use &man.pkg.add.1; to install a &os; binary package from
+	a local file or from a server on the network.</para>
 
       <example>
 	<title>Downloading a Package Manually and Installing It
@@ -457,26 +397,22 @@ local: lsof-4.56.4.tgz remote: lsof-4.56
 &prompt.root; <userinput>pkg_add <replaceable>lsof-4.56.4.tgz</replaceable></userinput></screen>
       </example>
 
-      <para>If you do not have a source of local packages (such as a
-	FreeBSD CD-ROM set) then it will probably be easier to use the
-	<option>-r</option> option to &man.pkg.add.1;.  This will
-	cause the utility to automatically determine the correct
-	object format and release and then fetch and install the
-	package from an FTP site.</para>
+      <para>If you do not have a source of local packages, such as a
+	&os; CD-ROM set, include <option>-r</option> with
+	&man.pkg.add.1;.  This automatically determines the correct
+	object format and release, and then fetches and installs the
+	package from an FTP site without any further user
+	intervention.</para>
 
       <indexterm>
 	<primary><command>pkg_add</command></primary>
       </indexterm>
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg_add -r <replaceable>lsof</replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
-      <para>The example above would download the correct package and
-	add it without any further user intervention.  If you want to
-	specify an alternative &os; Packages Mirror, instead of the
-	main distribution site, you have to set the
-	<envar>PACKAGESITE</envar> environment variable accordingly,
-	to override the default settings.  &man.pkg.add.1; uses
-	&man.fetch.3; to download the files, which honors various
-	environment variables, including
+      <para>To specify an alternative &os; FTP mirror, specify the
+	mirror in the <envar>PACKAGESITE</envar> environment variable.
+	&man.pkg.add.1; uses &man.fetch.3; to download files, which
+	uses various environment variables, including
 	<envar>FTP_PASSIVE_MODE</envar>, <envar>FTP_PROXY</envar>, and
 	<envar>FTP_PASSWORD</envar>.  You may need to set one or more
 	of these if you are behind a firewall, or need to use an
@@ -484,41 +420,32 @@ local: lsof-4.56.4.tgz remote: lsof-4.56
 	Note that in the example above <literal>lsof</literal> is used
 	instead of <literal>lsof-4.56.4</literal>.  When the remote
 	fetching feature is used, the version number of the package
-	must be removed.  &man.pkg.add.1; will automatically fetch the
-	latest version of the application.</para>
+	must be removed.</para>
 
       <note>
-	<para>&man.pkg.add.1; will download the latest version of
-	  your application if you are using &os.current; or
-	  &os.stable;.  If you run a -RELEASE version, it will grab
-	  the version of the package that was built with your
+	<para>&man.pkg.add.1; will automatically download the latest
+	  version of the application if you are using &os.current; or
+	  &os.stable;.  If you run a -RELEASE version, it instead
+	  installs the version of the package that was built with that
 	  release.  It is possible to change this behavior by
-	  overriding <envar>PACKAGESITE</envar>.
-	  For example, if you run a &os; 8.1-RELEASE
-	  system, by default &man.pkg.add.1; will try to fetch
-	  packages from
+	  overriding <envar>PACKAGESITE</envar>.  For example, on a
+	  &os; 8.1-RELEASE system, by default &man.pkg.add.1;
+	  will try to fetch packages from
 	  <literal>ftp://ftp.freebsd.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/i386/packages-8.1-release/Latest/</literal>.
-	  If you want to force &man.pkg.add.1; to download
-	  &os; 8-STABLE packages, set <envar>PACKAGESITE</envar>
-	  to
+	  To force &man.pkg.add.1; to download &os; 8-STABLE
+	  packages, set <envar>PACKAGESITE</envar> to
 	  <literal>ftp://ftp.freebsd.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/i386/packages-8-stable/Latest/</literal>.</para>
       </note>
 
       <para>Package files are distributed in <filename>.tgz</filename>
-	and <filename>.tbz</filename> formats.  You can find them at
-	<ulink
+	and <filename>.tbz</filename> formats.  Packages are
+	available from <ulink
 	url="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/packages/"></ulink>,
-	or on the FreeBSD CD-ROM distribution.  Every CD on the
-	FreeBSD 4-CD set (and the PowerPak, etc.) contains packages in
-	the <filename>/packages</filename> directory.  The layout of
-	the packages is similar to that of the
-	<filename>/usr/ports</filename> tree.  Each category has its
-	own directory, and every package can be found within the
-	<filename>All</filename> directory.</para>
-
-      <para>The directory structure of the package system matches the
-	ports layout; they work with each other to form the entire
-	package/port system.</para>
+	or the <filename>/packages</filename> directory of the &os;
+	DVD distribution.  The layout of the packages is similar to
+	that of the <filename>/usr/ports</filename> tree.  Each
+	category has its own directory, and every package can be found
+	within the <filename>All</filename> directory.</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>
@@ -529,8 +456,8 @@ local: lsof-4.56.4.tgz remote: lsof-4.56
 	<secondary>managing</secondary>
       </indexterm>
 
-      <para>&man.pkg.info.1; is a utility that lists and describes
-	the various packages installed.</para>
+      <para>&man.pkg.info.1; can be used to list and describe
+	installed packages:</para>
 
       <indexterm>
 	<primary><command>pkg_info</command></primary>
@@ -541,9 +468,9 @@ colordiff-1.0.13    A tool to colorize d
 docbook-1.2         Meta-port for the different versions of the DocBook DTD
 ...</screen>
 
-      <para>&man.pkg.version.1; is a utility that summarizes the
-	versions of all installed packages.  It compares the package
-	version to the current version found in the ports tree.</para>
+      <para>&man.pkg.version.1; summarizes the versions of all
+	installed packages and compares the package version to the
+	current version found in the ports tree.</para>
 
       <indexterm>
 	<primary><command>pkg_version</command></primary>
@@ -576,22 +503,22 @@ docbook                     =
 	    <row>
 	      <entry><</entry>
 	      <entry>The installed version is older than the one
-		available in the ports tree.</entry>
+		available in the local ports tree.</entry>
 	    </row>
 
 	    <row>
 	      <entry>></entry><entry>The installed version is newer
-		than the one found in the local ports tree.  (The
-		local ports tree is probably out of
-		date.)</entry>
+		than the one found in the local ports tree, meaning
+		that the local ports tree is probably out of
+		date.</entry>
 	    </row>
 
 	    <row>
 	      <entry>?</entry>
 	      <entry>The installed package cannot be found in the
-		ports index.  (This can happen, for instance, if an
-		installed port is removed from the Ports Collection or
-		renamed.)</entry>
+		ports index.  This can happen when an installed port
+		is removed from the Ports Collection or is
+		renamed.</entry>
 	    </row>
 
 	    <row>
@@ -625,18 +552,17 @@ docbook                     =
 	<secondary>deleting</secondary>
       </indexterm>
 
-      <para>To remove a previously installed software package, use the
-	&man.pkg.delete.1; utility.</para>
+      <para>To remove a previously installed software package, use
+	&man.pkg.delete.1;:</para>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg_delete <replaceable>xchat-1.7.1</replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
       <para>Note that &man.pkg.delete.1; requires the full package
 	name and number; the above command would not work if
 	<replaceable>xchat</replaceable> was given instead of
-	<replaceable>xchat-1.7.1</replaceable>.  It is, however, easy
-	to use &man.pkg.version.1; to find the version of the
-	installed package.  You could instead simply use a
-	wildcard:</para>
+	<replaceable>xchat-1.7.1</replaceable>.  Use
+	&man.pkg.version.1; to find the version of the
+	installed package, or use a wildcard:</para>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg_delete <replaceable>xchat\*</replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
@@ -647,10 +573,9 @@ docbook                     =
     <sect2>
       <title>Miscellaneous</title>
 
-      <para>All package information is stored within the
-	<filename>/var/db/pkg</filename> directory.  The installed
-	file list and descriptions of each package can be found within
-	files in this directory.</para>
+      <para>All package information, including the file list and
+	descriptions of each installed package is stored within the
+	<filename>/var/db/pkg</filename> directory.</para>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
@@ -659,11 +584,10 @@ docbook                     =
       Management</title>
 
     <para><application>pkgng</application> is an improved replacement
-      for the traditional &os; <application>pkg_install</application>
-      package management tools, offering many features that make
-      dealing with binary packages faster and easier.  The first
-      release of <application>pkgng</application> was in August,
-      2012.</para>
+      for the traditional &os; package management tools, offering
+      many features that make dealing with binary packages faster and
+      easier.  The first release of <application>pkgng</application>
+      was in August, 2012.</para>
 
     <para><application>pkgng</application> is not a replacement for
       port management tools like <filename
@@ -777,7 +701,7 @@ docbook                     =
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>man pkg-install</userinput></screen>
 
       <sect3 id="pkgng-pkg-info">
-	<title>Obtaining Information about Installed Packages with
+	<title>Obtaining Information About Installed Packages with
 	  <application>pkgng</application></title>
 
 	<para>Information about the packages installed on a system can
@@ -939,10 +863,10 @@ Deinstalling ca_root_nss-3.13.5... done<
 	<title>Backing Up the <application>pkgng</application> Package
 	  Database</title>
 
-	<para>Unlike the <application>pkg_install</application>
-	  package management system, <application>pkgng</application>
-	  includes its own package database backup mechanism.  To
-	  manually back up the package database contents, run:</para>
+	<para>Unlike the traditional package management system,
+	  <application>pkgng</application> includes its own package
+	  database backup mechanism.  To manually back up the package
+	  database contents, run:</para>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg backup -d <replaceable>pkgng.db</replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
@@ -1048,11 +972,10 @@ Deinstalling ca_root_nss-3.13.5... done<
   <sect1 id="ports-using">
     <title>Using the Ports Collection</title>
 
-    <para>The following sections provide basic instructions on using
-      the Ports Collection to install or remove programs from your
-      system.  The detailed description of available
-      <command>make</command> targets and environment variables is
-      available in &man.ports.7;.</para>
+    <para>This section provides basic instructions on using the Ports
+      Collection to install or remove software.  The detailed
+      description of available <command>make</command> targets and
+      environment variables is available in &man.ports.7;.</para>
 
     <warning>
       <para>As of mid 2012, the &os; Ports Project has migrated
@@ -1072,7 +995,7 @@ Deinstalling ca_root_nss-3.13.5... done<
       <para>The Ports Collection is a set of
 	<filename>Makefiles</filename>, patches, and description files
 	stored in <filename>/usr/ports</filename>.  This set of files
-	is used for building and installing applications on &os;.  The
+	is used to compile and install applications on &os;.  The
 	instructions below show several methods of obtaining the Ports
 	Collection if it was not installed during initial &os;
 	setup.</para>
@@ -1312,75 +1235,57 @@ Deinstalling ca_root_nss-3.13.5... done<
 	<secondary>installing</secondary>
       </indexterm>
 
-      <para>The first thing that should be explained when it comes to
-	the Ports Collection is what is actually meant by a
-	<quote>skeleton</quote>.  In a nutshell, a port skeleton is a
-	minimal set of files that tell your FreeBSD system how to
-	cleanly compile and install a program.  Each port skeleton
+      <para>A port skeleton is a set of files that tell &os; system
+	how to compile and install a program.  Each port skeleton
 	includes:</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>A <filename>Makefile</filename>.  The
-	    <filename>Makefile</filename> contains various statements
-	    that specify how the application should be compiled and
-	    where it should be installed on your system.</para>
+	  <para><filename>Makefile</filename>:  The
+	    <filename>Makefile</filename> contains statements that
+	    specify how the application should be compiled and where
+	    its components should be installed.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>A <filename>distinfo</filename> file.  This file
-	    contains information about the files that must be
-	    downloaded to build the port, and their checksums
-	    (using &man.sha256.1;), to
-	    verify that files have not been corrupted during the
-	    download.</para>
+	  <para><filename>distinfo</filename>:  This file contains
+	    information about the files that must be downloaded to
+	    build the port, and their checksums (using
+	    &man.sha256.1;), to verify that files have not been
+	    corrupted during the download.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>A <filename>files</filename> directory.  This
-	    directory contains patches to make the program compile and
-	    install on your FreeBSD system.  Patches are basically
-	    small files that specify changes to particular files.
-	    They are in plain text format, and basically say
-	    <quote>Remove line 10</quote> or <quote>Change line 26 to
-	    this ...</quote>.  Patches are also known as
-	    <quote>diffs</quote> because they are generated by the
-	    &man.diff.1; program.</para>
-
-	  <para>This directory may also contain other files used to
-	    build the port.</para>
+	  <para><filename>files/</filename>:  This directory contains
+	    any patches needed for the program to compile and install
+	    on &os;.  This directory may also contain other files used
+	    to build the port.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>A <filename>pkg-descr</filename> file.  This is a more
-	    detailed, often multiple-line, description of the
-	    program.</para>
+	  <para><filename>pkg-descr</filename>: This file provides a
+	    more detailed description of the program.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>A <filename>pkg-plist</filename> file.  This is a list
+	  <para><filename>pkg-plist</filename>:  This is a list
 	    of all the files that will be installed by the port.  It
 	    also tells the ports system what files to remove upon
 	    deinstallation.</para>
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
 
-      <para>Some ports have other files, such as
+      <para>Some ports include other files, such as
 	<filename>pkg-message</filename>.  The ports system uses these
 	files to handle special situations.  If you want more details
-	on these files, and on ports in general, check out the
-	<ulink url="&url.books.porters-handbook;/index.html">FreeBSD
+	on these files, and on ports in general, refer to the
+	<ulink url="&url.books.porters-handbook;/index.html">&os;
 	  Porter's Handbook</ulink>.</para>
 
-      <para>The port includes instructions on how to build source
-	code, but does not include the actual source code.  You can
-	get the source code from a CD-ROM or from the Internet.
-	Source code is distributed in whatever manner the software
-	author desires.  Frequently this is a tarred and gzipped file,
-	but it might be compressed with some other tool or even
-	uncompressed.  The program source code, whatever form it comes
-	in, is called a <quote>distfile</quote>.  The two methods for
-	installing a &os; port are described below.</para>
+      <para>The port does not include the actual source code, also
+	known as a <quote>distfile</quote>. Source code is distributed
+	in whatever manner the software author desires.  The two
+	methods for installing a &os; port are described below.</para>
 
       <note>
 	<para>You must be logged in as <username>root</username> to
@@ -1388,39 +1293,32 @@ Deinstalling ca_root_nss-3.13.5... done<
       </note>
 
       <warning>
-	<para>Before installing any port, you should be sure to have
-	  an up-to-date Ports Collection and you should check
-	  <ulink url="http://vuxml.freebsd.org/"></ulink> for security
-	  issues related to your port.</para>
-
-	<para>A security vulnerabilities check can be automatically
-	  done by <application>portaudit</application> before any new
-	  application installation.  This tool can be found in the
-	  Ports Collection (<filename
-	  role="package">ports-mgmt/portaudit</filename>).  Consider
-	  running <command>portaudit -F</command> before installing a
-	  new port, to fetch the current vulnerabilities database.  A
-	  security audit and an update of the database will be
-	  performed during the daily security system check.  For more
-	  information read the &man.portaudit.1; and &man.periodic.8;
-	  manual pages.</para>
+	<para>Before compiling any port, be sure to have an
+	  up-to-date Ports Collection and check <ulink
+	    url="http://vuxml.freebsd.org/"></ulink> for security
+	  issues related to your port.  If <filename
+	    role="package">ports-mgmt/portaudit</filename>) is
+	  installed, run <command>portaudit -F</command> before
+	  installing a new port, to fetch the current vulnerabilities
+	  database.  A security audit and an update of the database
+	  will be performed during the daily security system check.
+	  For more information read the &man.portaudit.1; and
+	  &man.periodic.8; manual pages.</para>
       </warning>
 
-      <para>The Ports Collection makes an assumption that you have a
-	working Internet connection.  If you do not, you will need to
-	put a copy of the distfile into
-	<filename>/usr/ports/distfiles</filename> manually.</para>
+      <para>Using the Ports Collection assumes a working Internet
+	connection.  Otherwise, manually obtain and place a copy of
+	the distfile into
+	<filename>/usr/ports/distfiles</filename>.</para>
 
-      <para>To begin, change to the directory for the port you want
-	to install:</para>
+      <para>To begin, change to the directory of the port to
+	be installed:</para>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/ports/sysutils/lsof</userinput></screen>
 
-      <para>Once inside the <filename>lsof</filename> directory, you
-	will see the port skeleton.  The next step is to compile, or
-	<quote>build</quote>, the port.  This is done by simply
-	typing <command>make</command> at the prompt.  Once you have
-	done so, you should see something like this:</para>
+      <para>To compile, or <quote>build</quote>, the port, type
+	<command>make</command> at the prompt.  You should see
+	messages similar to the ones in this example:</para>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>make</userinput>
 >> lsof_4.57D.freebsd.tar.gz doesn't seem to exist in /usr/ports/distfiles/.
@@ -1442,11 +1340,9 @@ Deinstalling ca_root_nss-3.13.5... done<
 ...
 &prompt.root;</screen>
 
-      <para>Notice that once the compile is complete you are
-	returned to your prompt.  The next step is to install the
-	port.  In order to install it, you simply need to tack one
-	word onto the <command>make</command> command, and that word
-	is <maketarget>install</maketarget>:</para>
+      <para>Once the compile is complete, you are returned to the
+	prompt.  The next step is to install the port using
+	<maketarget>make install</maketarget>:</para>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>make install</userinput>
 ===>  Installing for lsof-4.57
@@ -1461,18 +1357,18 @@ Deinstalling ca_root_nss-3.13.5... done<
       increased privileges.
 &prompt.root;</screen>
 
-      <para>Once you are returned to your prompt, you should be able
-	to run the application you just installed.  Since
-	<command>lsof</command> is a program that runs with
-	increased privileges, a security warning is shown.  During
-	the building and installation of ports, you should take heed
-	of any other warnings that may appear.</para>
+      <para>Once you are returned to the prompt, you should be able
+	to run the installed application.  Since
+	<command>lsof</command> is a program that runs with increased
+	privileges, a security warning is shown.  During the building
+	and installation of ports, take heed of any other warnings
+	that may appear.</para>
 
       <para>It is a good idea to delete the working subdirectory,
 	which contains all the temporary files used during
-	compilation.  Not only does it consume valuable disk space,
-	but it would also cause problems later when upgrading to the
-	newer version of the port.</para>
+	compilation.  Doing so saves disk space and minimizes the
+	chance of problems later when upgrading to the newer version
+	of the port.</para>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>make clean</userinput>
 ===>  Cleaning for lsof-4.57
@@ -1489,13 +1385,12 @@ Deinstalling ca_root_nss-3.13.5... done<
       </note>
 
       <note>
-	<para>When installing a port, using only
+	<para>Using only
 	  <command>make <maketarget>install</maketarget></command>
-	  from the beginning means there will potentially be many
+	  means there will potentially be many
 	  waiting periods between user interaction as the default
-	  behaviour is to prompt the user for options.  When there are
-	  many dependencies, this sometimes makes building a single
-	  port a huge hassle.  To avoid this, first run <command>make
+	  behaviour is to prompt the user for options.  To avoid this
+	  when there are many dependencies, first run <command>make
 	    <maketarget>config-recursive</maketarget></command> to do
 	  the configuration in one batch.  Then run <command>make
 	    <maketarget>install [clean]</maketarget></command>
@@ -1519,32 +1414,30 @@ Deinstalling ca_root_nss-3.13.5... done<
 	  available in the directories listed in the
 	  <envar>PATH</envar> environment variable, to speed up lookup
 	  operations for the executable file of these commands.  If
-	  you are using one of these shells, you might have to use the
-	  <command>rehash</command> command after installing a port,
-	  before the newly installed commands can be used.  This
-	  command will work for shells like <command>tcsh</command>.
-	  Use the <command>hash -r</command> command for shells like
-	  <command>sh</command>.  Look at the documentation for your
-	  shell for more information.</para>
+	  you are using <command>tcsh</command>, you might have to
+	  type <command>rehash</command> so that a newly installed
+	  command can be used without specifying its full path.  Use
+	  <command>hash -r</command> instead for the
+	  <command>sh</command> shell.  Refer to the documentation for
+	  the shell for more information.</para>
       </note>
 
-      <para>Some third-party DVD-ROM products such as the FreeBSD
-	Toolkit from the
-	<ulink url="http://www.freebsdmall.com/">FreeBSD Mall</ulink>
-	contain distfiles.  They can be used with the Ports
-	Collection.  Mount the DVD-ROM on <filename>/cdrom</filename>.
-	If you use a different mount point, set
-	<makevar>CD_MOUNTPTS</makevar> make variable.  The needed
-	distfiles will be automatically used if they are present on
-	the disk.</para>
+      <para>Some third-party DVD products such as the &os;
+	Toolkit from the <ulink url="http://www.freebsdmall.com/">&os;
+	  Mall</ulink> contain distfiles.  They can be used with the
+	Ports Collection.  Mount the DVD on
+	<filename>/cdrom</filename>.  If you use a different mount
+	point, set <makevar>CD_MOUNTPTS</makevar> make variable.  The
+	needed distfiles will be automatically used if they are
+	present on the disk.</para>

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