svn commit: r40764 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq

Eitan Adler eadler at FreeBSD.org
Sun Jan 27 12:51:15 UTC 2013


Author: eadler
Date: Sun Jan 27 12:51:14 2013
New Revision: 40764
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40764

Log:
  Remove fluff words.
  
  Approved by:	bcr (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sun Jan 27 12:51:12 2013	(r40763)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sun Jan 27 12:51:14 2013	(r40764)
@@ -5761,18 +5761,17 @@ Key F15        A        A        Menu Wo
 	    </listitem>
 	  </itemizedlist>
 
-	  <para>In fact, nVidia provides detailed information on which
-	    card is supported by which driver.  This information is
-	    available directly on their web site: <ulink
+	  <para>nVidia provides detailed information on which
+	    card is supported by which driver
+	    on their web site: <ulink
 	      url="http://www.nvidia.com/object/IO_32667.html"></ulink>.</para>
 
-	  <para>For Matrox G200/G400, you should check the
+	  <para>For Matrox G200/G400, check the
 	    <filename role="package">x11-servers/mga_hal</filename>
 	    port.</para>
 
-	  <para>For ATI Rage 128 and Radeon, see the
-	    &man.ati.4x;, &man.r128.4x; and &man.radeon.4x; manual
-	    pages.</para>
+	  <para>For ATI Rage 128 and Radeon see
+	    &man.ati.4x;, &man.r128.4x; and &man.radeon.4x;.</para>
 	</answer>
       </qandaentry>
     </qandaset>


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