svn commit: r41024 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users

Benjamin Kaduk kaduk at MIT.EDU
Fri Feb 22 04:06:47 UTC 2013


On Thu, 21 Feb 2013, Warren Block wrote:

> On Thu, 21 Feb 2013, Benjamin Kaduk wrote:
>
>> On Thu, 21 Feb 2013, Dru Lavigne wrote:
>> 
>>> @@ -700,11 +683,9 @@ passwd: done</screen>
>>>       <secondary>quotas</secondary>
>>>     </indexterm>
>>>     <indexterm><primary>disk quotas</primary></indexterm>
>>> -    <para>Disk quotas limit disk usage to users, and
>>> -      they
>>> -      provide a way to quickly check that usage without
>>> -      calculating it every time.  Quotas are discussed in <xref
>>> -	linkend="quotas"/>.</para>
>>> +    <para>Disk quotas limit disk usage to users and provide a way to
>>> +      quickly check that usage without calculating it every time.
>> 
>> This sentence is still not quite there.
>> Maybe "Disk quotas limit the disk usage available to users" or "limit the 
>> disk usage of users"?
>
> "Disk quotas limit the amount of disk space available to users"

Sounds good, thanks.

-Ben


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