svn commit: r41010 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors

Benjamin Kaduk kaduk at MIT.EDU
Tue Feb 19 23:59:03 UTC 2013


On Tue, 19 Feb 2013, Giorgos Keramidas wrote:

> On 2013-02-18 16:01, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk at MIT.EDU> wrote:
>> On Mon, 18 Feb 2013, Eitan Adler wrote:
>>> Author: eadler
>>> Date: Mon Feb 18 19:54:21 2013
>>> New Revision: 41010
>>> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41010
>>>
>>> Log:
>>> While cvsup is deprecated, as long as it is documented and working,
>>> don't document bogus, ancient, or useless parts.
>>>
>>> Approved by:	bcr (mentor)
>>>
>>> Modified:
>>> head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml
>>>
>>> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml
>>> -	<para>With this very useful feature, those users who are on
>>> +	<para>With this very feature, those users who are on
>>
>> Do we care more that it is this particular feature or that it is a
>> useful feature?  ("With this very ..." does not seem particularly
>> consistent with our style.)
>
> 'With this very feature' can be understood also as 'with this specific
> feature' or 'with precisely this feature', so it's syntactically
> correct.  It _is_ a bit confusing though as a diff/change, so I'd
> probably prefer the simpler 'With this feature' too.

That's what I was trying to say, sorry if it was unclear.

The committed fix seems acceptable.

-Ben


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