svn commit: r40980 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing

Jeremie Le Hen jlh at FreeBSD.org
Tue Feb 19 22:14:12 UTC 2013


On Tue, Feb 19, 2013 at 05:06:18PM -0500, Eitan Adler wrote:
> 
> I did not intend to offend anyone and if I did, I apologize.
> 
> Perhaps any of the following?
> 
> "Twiddle with a poorly worded sentence."
> "Make this sentence more clear"
> or
> "Avoid references to the first person and clarify sentence."

Yes.  Basically, let's try to be as neutral as possible.

Thank you very much for your understanding :).

Regards,
-- 
Jeremie Le Hen

Scientists say the world is made up of Protons, Neutrons and Electrons.
They forgot to mention Morons.


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