svn commit: r39521 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems

Warren Block wblock at
Tue Sep 11 17:53:03 UTC 2012

Author: wblock
Date: Tue Sep 11 17:53:02 2012
New Revision: 39521

  Remove some extraneous uses of "the".


Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.sgml
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.sgml	Tue Sep 11 13:28:59 2012	(r39520)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.sgml	Tue Sep 11 17:53:02 2012	(r39521)
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ vfs.zfs.vdev.cache.size="5M"</programlis
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>zpool create example /dev/da0</userinput></screen>
-	<para>To view the new pool, review the output of the
+	<para>To view the new pool, review the output of
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>df</userinput>
@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ example/compressed on /example/compresse
 &prompt.root; <userinput>zfs set copies=2 example/data</userinput></screen>
 	<para>It is now possible to see the data and space utilization
-	  by issuing the <command>df</command> again:</para>
+	  by issuing <command>df</command> again:</para>
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>df</userinput>
 Filesystem         1K-blocks    Used    Avail Capacity  Mounted on
@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ example/data        17547008       0 175
 	<para>Notice that each file system on the pool has the same
 	  amount of available space.  This is the reason for using
-	  the <command>df</command> through these examples, to show
+	  <command>df</command> through these examples, to show
 	  that the file systems are using only the amount of space
 	  they need and will all draw from the same pool.
 	  The <acronym>ZFS</acronym> file system does away with concepts
@@ -351,7 +351,7 @@ example/data        17547008       0 175
 	  &man.df.1; commands as before.  More disk devices may have
 	  been allocated by adding them to the end of the list above.
 	  Make a new file system in the pool, called
-	  <literal>home</literal> where user files will eventually be
+	  <literal>home</literal>, where user files will eventually be
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>zfs create storage/home</userinput></screen>
@@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ example/data        17547008       0 175
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>zfs rollback storage/home at 08-30-08</userinput></screen>
-	<para>To get a list of all available snapshots, run the
+	<para>To get a list of all available snapshots, run
 	  <command>ls</command> in the file system's
 	  <filename class="directory">.zfs/snapshot</filename>
 	  directory.  For example, to see the previously taken
@@ -406,7 +406,7 @@ example/data        17547008       0 175
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>zfs destroy storage/home at 08-30-08</userinput></screen>
-	<para>There is no reason, after all of this testing, we should
+	<para>After all of this testing, there is no reason we should
 	  keep <filename class="directory">/storage/home</filename>
 	  around in its present state.  Make it the real
 	  <filename class="directory">/home</filename> file

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