svn commit: r38983 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config

Benedict Reuschling bcr at
Mon Jun 4 16:18:30 UTC 2012

Author: bcr
Date: Mon Jun  4 16:18:30 2012
New Revision: 38983

  Fix a comma splice by making two separate (shorter) sentences out of
  a long one.
  Submitted by:	bjk


Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml	Mon Jun  4 16:08:25 2012	(r38982)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml	Mon Jun  4 16:18:30 2012	(r38983)
@@ -1435,7 +1435,7 @@ ifconfig_fxp0_alias7="inet n
     <para>System logging is an important aspect of system
       administration.  It is used both to detect hardware and software
-      issues and errors in the system, it also plays a very
+      issues and errors in the system.  It also plays a very
       important role in security auditing and incident response.
       System daemons without a controlling terminal also usually log
       information to a system logging facility or other log

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