svn commit: r38967 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config

[Warren Block]

On Sat, 2 Jun 2012, Benedict Reuschling wrote:

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> Am 02.06.12 23:43, schrieb Benedict Reuschling:
>> Author: bcr
>> Date: Sat Jun  2 21:43:10 2012
>> New Revision: 38967
>> URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/38967
>>
>> Log:
>>   This change adds much more information about syslogd and newsyslog
>>   than we had before in the configuration chapter. It describes how
>>   the system logger can be configured, the rationale behind it and
>>   the most important field that the user should edit.
>
> Argh, this should read "fields", as there are many fields to edit, of
> course. ;-)

Also needs another comma:

   It describes how the system logger can be configured, the rationale
   behind it and the most important field that the user should edit.
            ^

Justification: "Use the serial comma" in
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.html#WRITING-STYLE