svn commit: r40476 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/9.1R

Hiroki Sato hrs at FreeBSD.org
Tue Dec 25 04:12:24 UTC 2012


Author: hrs
Date: Tue Dec 25 04:12:24 2012
New Revision: 40476
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40476

Log:
  Merge fixes from r244664.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/9.1R/relnotes.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/9.1R/relnotes.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/9.1R/relnotes.xml	Mon Dec 24 22:39:31 2012	(r40475)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/9.1R/relnotes.xml	Tue Dec 25 04:12:24 2012	(r40476)
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
       Detailed Release Notes</a>.</p>
 
     <ul>
-      <li><p>FreeBSD Jail subsystem now supports 	mounting <a
+      <li><p>The FreeBSD Jail subsystem now supports 	mounting <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=devfs&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">devfs</span>(5)</span></a>, <a
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">sched_ule</span>(4)</span></a>
 	    scheduler has 	been improved on CPU load balancing of
-	    SMT (Simultaneous 	MultiThreading) CPUs. It gives
+	    SMT (Simultaneous 	MultiThreading) CPUs. It gives a
 	    10-15% performance improvement 	when the number of
 	    threads is lesser than the number of 	logical CPUs.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233599"
@@ -65,12 +65,12 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=boot0cfg&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">boot0cfg</span>(8)</span></a>
-	    utility now 	 supports configuration of PXE boot via
+	    utility now 	 supports configuration of PXE boot via the
 	    	 <tt class="filename">boot0</tt> boot block
 	    temporarily on the 	 next boot. The slice number <tt
 	    class="literal">6</tt> or a 	 keyword <tt
 	    class="literal">PXE</tt> can be specified to enable 	
-	  PXE boot in the <code class="option">-s</code> option.[<a
+	  PXE boot using the <code class="option">-s</code> option.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=230065"
 	    target="_top">r230065</a>]</p></li>
 
@@ -78,12 +78,12 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=hwpmc&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">hwpmc</span>(4)</span></a> 	
-	    driver now supports Intel Sandy Bridge 	
+	    driver now supports the Intel Sandy Bridge 	
 	    microarchitecture.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234046"
 	    target="_top">r234046</a>]</p></li>
 
-      <li><p>[arm] FreeBSD/arm now supports Atmel 	 SAM9XE family
+      <li><p>[arm] FreeBSD/arm now supports the Atmel 	 SAM9XE family
 	  of microcontrollers.[<a
 	  href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236081"
 	  target="_top">r236081</a>]</p></li>
@@ -97,8 +97,8 @@
 	  href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=230302"
 	  target="_top">r230302</a>]</p></li>
 
-      <li><p>The drm2(4) Intel GPU driver, 	 which supports GEM,
-	  KMS, and works with new generations of 	 GPUs such as
+      <li><p>The drm2(4) Intel GPU driver, 	 which supports GEM and
+	  KMS and works with new generations of 	 GPUs such as
 	  IronLake, SandyBridge, and IvyBridge, has been 	
 	  added. The <a
 	  href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=agp&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@
 	  href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=snd_hda&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	  <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	  class="refentrytitle">snd_hda</span>(4)</span></a> driver
-	  has been 	 updated. It now supports HDMI, new volume
+	  has been 	 updated. It now supports and provides HDMI, new volume
 	  control, 	 automatic recording source selection, runtime
 	  	 reconfiguration, more then 4 PCM devices on a
 	  controller, 	 multichannel recording, additional
@@ -148,12 +148,12 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=bge&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">bge</span>(4)</span></a> and
-	    brgphy(4) driver have been 	 improved:</p>
+	    brgphy(4) drivers have been 	 improved:</p>
 
 	<ul>
 	  <li>
 	    <p>A bug which could prevent the 		DMA
-	      functionality from working correctly, has been
+	      functionality from working correctly has been
 	      		fixed.[<a
 	      href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229350"
 	      target="_top">r229350</a>]</p>
@@ -161,14 +161,14 @@
 
 	  <li>
 	    <p>It now works with PCI-X BCM 5704 		controller
-	      that connected to AMD-8131 PCI-X bridge.[<a
+	      that is connected to AMD-8131 PCI-X bridge.[<a
 	      href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233495"
 	      target="_top">r233495</a>]</p>
 	  </li>
 
 	  <li>
-	    <p>It now supports 		BCM 5720 and BCM 5720C PHY,
-	      and BCM 57780 1000BASE-T 		media interface.[<a
+	    <p>It now supports 		the BCM 5720 and BCM 5720C PHY,
+	      and the BCM 57780 1000BASE-T 		media interface.[<a
 	      href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229357"
 	      target="_top">r229357</a>, <a
 	      href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229867"
@@ -200,11 +200,11 @@
 	  <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=cxgb&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	  <span class="citerefentry"><span
-	  class="refentrytitle">cxgb</span>(4)</span></a> driver has
-	  been updated to firmware version 	 1.5.2.0. This now
-	  supports device configuration via a 	 plain text
+	  class="refentrytitle">cxgb</span>(4)</span></a> driver have
+	  been updated to firmware version 	 1.5.2.0. They now
+	  support device configuration via a 	 plain text
 	  configuration file, IPv6 hardware checksumming, 	 IPv6
-	  TSO and LRO, <tt class="literal">loadfw</tt> command in the
+	  TSO and LRO, a <tt class="literal">loadfw</tt> command in the
 	  	 cxgbetool(8) utility which allows to install a
 	  firmware to 	 the card, <a
 	  href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">oce</span>(4)</span></a> driver,
 	    which 	 supports Emulex OneConnect 10Gbit Ethernet
-	    card, has been 	 added.[<a
+	    cards, has been 	 added.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=231663"
 	    target="_top">r231663</a>]</p></li>
 
@@ -257,7 +257,7 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=re&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE"><span
 	    class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">re</span>(4)</span></a> driver now
-	    	 supports RTL8411 PCIe Gigabit Ethernet controller. A
+	    	 supports the RTL8411 PCIe Gigabit Ethernet controller. A
 	    bug 	 which could prevent WoL (Wake-on-LAN) from
 	    working on 	 RTL8168E has been fixed.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229529"
@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">xnb</span>(4)</span></a> Xen
 	    Paravirtualized 	 Backend Ethernet Driver (netback)
-	    has been updated. This is 	 attached via newbus
+	    has been updated. This is 	 attached via the newbus
 	    framework and works properly in both 	 HVM and PVM
 	    mode.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=231697"
@@ -296,7 +296,7 @@
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234597"
 	    target="_top">r234597</a>]</p></li>
 
-      <li><p>FreeBSD <a
+      <li><p>The FreeBSD <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ip6&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">ip6</span>(4)</span></a> protocol
@@ -305,7 +305,7 @@
 	    href="http://people.freebsd.org/~bz/bench/"
 	    target="_top">http://people.freebsd.org/~bz/bench/</a>.</p></li>
 
-      <li><p>FreeBSD <a
+      <li><p>The FreeBSD <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ip6&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">ip6</span>(4)</span></a> protocol
@@ -325,7 +325,7 @@
 	  <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=igb&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
-	    class="refentrytitle">igb</span>(4)</span></a>. and <a
+	    class="refentrytitle">igb</span>(4)</span></a>, and <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=re&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE"><span
 	    class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">re</span>(4)</span></a> drivers now
@@ -379,7 +379,7 @@
 	    class="refentrytitle">geom</span>(4)</span></a> class now
 	    supports 	 <tt class="literal">BIO_DELETE</tt>. This
 	    means 	 <tt class="literal">TRIM</tt> command will be
-	    issued on the 	 supported devices when deleting
+	    issued on 	 supported devices when deleting
 	    data.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=238500"
 	    target="_top">r238500</a>]</p></li>
@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@
 	    class="command">remove</tt>, <tt
 	    class="command">fail</tt>, 	 <tt
 	    class="command">restore</tt>, <tt
-	    class="command">configure</tt> 	 subcommands in <a
+	    class="command">configure</tt> 	 subcommands in the <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=gmultipath&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">gmultipath</span>(8)</span></a>
@@ -416,7 +416,7 @@
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">mkulzma</span>(8)</span></a> utility
 	    have been added. This class 	 supports lzma compressed
-	    images like 	 <b class="application">UZIP</b> <a
+	    images like the 	 <b class="application">UZIP</b> <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=geom&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">geom</span>(4)</span></a> class and
@@ -451,7 +451,7 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ixgbe&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">ixgbe</span>(4)</span></a> driver
-	    now supports 	 Intel X540 adapter.[<a
+	    now supports 	 the Intel X540 adapter.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=230775"
 	    target="_top">r230775</a>]</p></li>
 
@@ -501,7 +501,7 @@
 	    <p>It now supports a timeout on 	 positive name cache
 	      entries on the client side. A new 	 mount option
 	      <code class="varname">nametimeo</code> has been added
-	      	 and set to <tt class="literal">60</tt> (in second)
+	      	 and set to <tt class="literal">60</tt> (in seconds)
 	      by 	 default.[<a
 	      href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233326"
 	      target="_top">r233326</a>]</p>
@@ -519,7 +519,7 @@
 	      mmap-backed file on an NFS 	 filesystem, flushing
 	      changes to the data could fail 	 under some
 	      circumstances such as errors due to 	 permission
-	      mismatch and this failure could not detected 	 as an
+	      mismatch, and this failure could not detected 	 as an
 	      error. A new <a
 	      href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	      <span class="citerefentry"><span
@@ -541,16 +541,16 @@
 		href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=nfsv4&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 		<span class="citerefentry"><span
 		class="refentrytitle">nfsv4</span>(4)</span></a>
-		filesystem now 	 supports a new <a
+		filesystem now 	 supports a <a
 		href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 		<span class="citerefentry"><span
 		class="refentrytitle">sysctl</span>(8)</span></a>
 		variable 	 <code
 		class="varname">vfs.nfsd.disable_checkutf8</code>. This
-			 disables the check for a UTF-8 compliance in the
+			 disables the check for UTF-8 compliance in the
 			 filenames. This is disabled by default. Note
 		that 	 enabling this may help some
-		interoperability issue but 	 results in an NFSv4
+		interoperability issues but 	 results in an NFSv4
 		server that is non-RFC 3530 	 compliant.[<a
 		href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229799"
 		target="_top">r229799</a>]</p>
@@ -571,13 +571,13 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=tmpfs&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">tmpfs</span>(5)</span></a>
-	    filesystem now 	 supports a new <a
+	    filesystem now 	 supports a <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">sysctl</span>(8)</span></a> variable
 	    	 <code
 	    class="varname">vfs.tmpfs.memory_reserved</code> to set
-	    amount 	 of required free pages when <a
+	    the amount 	 of required free pages when <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=tmpfs&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">tmpfs</span>(5)</span></a> attempts
@@ -586,7 +586,7 @@
 	    target="_top">r234849</a>]</p></li>
 
       <li><p>FreeBSD ZFS filesystem has been 	 updated by merging
-	  improvements in illumos project. The 	 following changes
+	  improvements from illumos project. The 	 following changes
 	  are made:[<a
 	  href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229578"
 	  target="_top">r229578</a>, <a
@@ -600,31 +600,31 @@
 	  </li>
 
 	  <li>
-	    <p><a
+	    <p>The <a
 		href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zfs&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
-		<span class="citerefentry"><span
+		The <span class="citerefentry"><span
 		class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> <tt
 		class="command">send</tt> command 	 now reports
-		estimated size of the stream.</p>
+		an estimated size of the stream.</p>
 	  </li>
 
 	  <li>
-	    <p><a
+	    <p>The <a
 		href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zfs&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 		<span class="citerefentry"><span
 		class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> <tt
 		class="command">destroy</tt> command 	 now reports
-		estimated space which would be reclaimed when 	
+		an estimate of the space which would be reclaimed, when 	
 		<code class="option">-n</code> flag is specified.</p>
 	  </li>
 
 	  <li>
-	    <p><a
+	    <p>The <a
 		href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zfs&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 		<span class="citerefentry"><span
 		class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> <tt
 		class="command">get</tt> command now 	 supports
-		<code class="option">-t <tt
+		the <code class="option">-t <tt
 		class="replaceable"><i>type</i></tt></code> 	 flag
 		to specify the data type.</p>
 	  </li>
@@ -651,7 +651,7 @@
 	    class="refentrytitle">gcc</span>(1)</span></a> compiler
 	    has 	been fixed. It could lead to incorrect
 	    calculations when 	<code
-	    class="option">-ffast-math</code> flag is specified.[<a
+	    class="option">-ffast-math</code> is specified.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234023"
 	    target="_top">r234023</a>]</p></li>
 
@@ -659,7 +659,7 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ifconfig&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">ifconfig</span>(8)</span></a>
-	    utility now 	supports <tt
+	    utility now 	supports a <tt
 	    class="literal">vlanhwcsum</tt> parameter to set or
 	    	reset checksum offloading capability on VLANs.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=231221"
@@ -669,7 +669,7 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ifconfig&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">ifconfig</span>(8)</span></a>
-	    utility now 	supports <tt class="literal">carp
+	    utility now 	supports a <tt class="literal">carp
 	    	<tt class="replaceable"><i>state</i></tt></tt>
 	    parameter to set 	the state to <tt
 	    class="literal">backup</tt> or 	<tt
@@ -681,7 +681,7 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=jail&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">jail</span>(8)</span></a> utility
-	    now supports 	configuration file (<a
+	    now supports 	a configuration file (<a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=jail.conf&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">jail.conf</span>(5)</span></a>) for
@@ -715,7 +715,7 @@
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">rtld</span>(1)</span></a> run-time
 	    linker now 	supports GCC's RELRO (RElocation
-	    Read-Only). This prevents 	GOT (Global Offset Table)
+	    Read-Only). This prevents the 	GOT (Global Offset Table)
 	    from being overwritten.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=231579"
 	    target="_top">r231579</a>]</p></li>
@@ -724,7 +724,7 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=rtld&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">rtld</span>(1)</span></a> run-time
-	    linker now 	supports GNU hash section (<tt
+	    linker now 	supports a GNU hash section (<tt
 	    class="literal">DT_GNU_HASH</tt>), 	which is a
 	    replacement of optional ELF hash section.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235396"
@@ -794,14 +794,14 @@
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229588"
 	    target="_top">r229588</a>]</p></li>
 
-      <li><p><b class="application">libpcap</b> 	library have been
+      <li><p><b class="application">libpcap</b> 	library has been
 	  updated to 1.2.1.[<a
 	  href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236167"
 	  target="_top">r236167</a>]</p></li>
 
       <li><p><b class="application">libstdc++</b> 	have been
 	    updated to rev 135556 of 	<tt
-	    class="literal">gcc-4_2-branch</tt> (LGPLv2-licensed
+	    class="literal">gcc-4_2-branch</tt> (the last LGPLv2-licensed
 	    	version).[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=229551"
 	    target="_top">r229551</a>]</p></li>
@@ -820,7 +820,7 @@
 	    target="_top">r235971</a>]</p></li>
 
       <li><p><b class="application">OpenSSL</b> has 	been updated
-	    to 0.9.8x.[<a
+	    to version 0.9.8x.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=237998"
 	    target="_top">r237998</a>]</p></li>
 
@@ -828,7 +828,7 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=tcpdump&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">tcpdump</span>(1)</span></a>)
-	    utility has been updated to 4.2.1.[<a
+	    utility has been updated to version 4.2.1.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236192"
 	    target="_top">r236192</a>]</p></li>
 
@@ -845,8 +845,8 @@
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233447"
 	    target="_top">r233447</a>]</p></li>
 
-      <li><p><b class="application">zlib</b> 	library have been
-	  updated to 1.2.7.[<a
+      <li><p><b class="application">zlib</b> 	library has been
+	  updated to version 1.2.7.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=237691"
 	    target="_top">r237691</a>]</p></li>
 


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