svn commit: r40403 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq
eadler at freebsd.org
Tue Dec 18 01:47:32 UTC 2012
On 17 December 2012 12:50, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk at mit.edu> wrote:
> On Mon, 17 Dec 2012, Eitan Adler wrote:
>> Author: eadler
>> Date: Mon Dec 17 16:01:53 2012
>> New Revision: 40403
>> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40403
>> Modernize ppp-drop-heavy-load to conform with current defaults.
>> Submitted by: Daniel O'Connor
>> Approved by: bcr (mentor)
>> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
>> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Mon Dec 17 16:01:51 2012
>> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Mon Dec 17 16:01:53 2012
>> @@ -7245,13 +7245,12 @@ add 0 0 HISADDR</programlisting>
>> <para>If you have Link Quality Reporting (LQR) configured, it
>> is possible that too many LQR packets are lost between your
>> - machine and the peer. The &man.ppp.8; program deduces that
>> - the line must therefore be bad, and disconnects. Prior to
>> - &os; version 2.2.5, LQR was enabled by default. It is now
>> - disabled by default. LQR can be disabled with the following
>> - line:</para>
>> + machine and the peer. &man.ppp.8; deduces that
> Hmm, starting a sentence with an entity, somewhat questionable.
> Why not "Such packet loss causes &man.ppp.8; to deduce that"?
No objection to this.
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