svn commit: r40290 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq

Eitan Adler eadler at
Fri Dec 7 13:00:42 UTC 2012

Author: eadler
Date: Fri Dec  7 13:00:42 2012
New Revision: 40290

  Avoid the use of "etc."
  Instead of listing all the formats point people to the FTP server
  which has a README.
  Approved by:	bcr (mentor)


Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Fri Dec  7 13:00:39 2012	(r40289)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Fri Dec  7 13:00:42 2012	(r40290)
@@ -89,8 +89,8 @@
 	this document is always available from the <ulink
 	  url="">&os; World Wide Web server</ulink>.
 	It may also be downloaded as one large <ulink
-	  url="book.html">HTML</ulink> file with HTTP or as plain text,
-	&postscript;, PDF, etc. from the <ulink
+	  url="book.html">HTML</ulink> file with HTTP or as a variety
+	of other formats from the <ulink
 	  url="">&os; FTP
 	server</ulink>.  You may also want to <ulink
 	  url="&url.base;/search/index.html">Search the FAQ</ulink>.</para>

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