PERFORCE change 161505 for review

[Rene Ladan]

http://perforce.freebsd.org/chv.cgi?CH=161505

Change 161505 by rene at rene_self on 2009/05/03 20:04:26

	[solid-state] some more nits

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.. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state/article.sgml#12 edit

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==== //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state/article.sgml#12 (text+ko) ====

@@ -154,8 +154,8 @@
 
     <para><filename>/etc/rc.d/var</filename> mounts <filename>/var</filename>
       as a memory filesystem, makes a configurable list of directories in
-      <filename>/var</filename> with the &man.mkdir.1; command, changes modes
-      on some of those directories.  In the execution of
+      <filename>/var</filename> with the &man.mkdir.1; command, and
+      changes modes on some of those directories.  In the execution of
       <filename>/etc/rc.d/var</filename>, one other
       <filename>rc.conf</filename> variable comes into play &ndash;
       <literal>varsize</literal>.  The <filename>/etc/rc.d/var</filename>
@@ -166,8 +166,8 @@
 
     <para>Remember that this value is in sectors by default.</para>
 
-    <para>The fact that <filename>/var</filename> and
-      <filename>/dev</filename> are read-write filesystems is an important
+    <para>The fact that <filename>/var</filename>
+      is a read-write filesystem is an important
       distinction, as the <filename>/</filename> partition (and any other
       partitions you may have on your flash media) should be mounted
       read-only.  Remember that in <xref linkend="intro"> we detailed the