www/174840: the grammar of 9.1-RELEASE announcements

[deeptech71]

>Number:         174840
>Category:       www
>Synopsis:       the grammar of 9.1-RELEASE announcements
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-www
>State:          open
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>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Dec 30 21:00:00 UTC 2012
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>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     deeptech71
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>Description:
Certain web pages are in need of a review by an expert on English grammar.

On http://www.freebsd.org/releases/9.1R/announce.html,

  "until it's End-of-Life (EoL) date of"
should instead be
  "until its End-of-Life (EoL) date of".

On http://www.freebsd.org/releases/9.1R/relnotes.html and http://www.freebsd.org/releases/9.1R/relnotes-detailed.html,

  "more then 4"
should instead be
  "more than 4";

  "A bug in ae(4) driver"
should instead be
  "A bug in the ae(4) driver";

in
  "It now works",
"It" should be replaced with "bge(4)" or whatever "It" was supposed to refer to ("It" currently refers to "a bug which [...]");

  "cxgbe(4) and cxgb(4) driver"
should instead be
  "cxgbe(4) and cxgb(4) drivers";

  "multiple FIB"
should instead be
  "multiple FIBs";

  "clang"
should instead be
  "Clang";

and may I be relieved from having to describe hundreds of other errors here -- review the release announcements yourself.
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