www/105216: [patch] www/en/about.sgml - improve grammar

[Gabor Kovesdan]

>Number:         105216
>Category:       www
>Synopsis:       [patch] www/en/about.sgml - improve grammar
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-www
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Nov 06 18:00:55 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Gabor Kovesdan
>Release:        FreeBSD 6.1-RELEASE-p3 amd64
>Organization:
n/a
>Environment:
>Description:

- "is" sounds weird with "these", "are" is better in this case

>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:

--- about.sgml.diff begins here ---
Index: www/en/about.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /usr/cvs/www/en/about.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -r1.10 about.sgml
--- www/en/about.sgml	12 Oct 2006 09:21:19 -0000	1.10
+++ www/en/about.sgml	6 Nov 2006 17:22:32 -0000
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
 			including CD-ROM, DVD-ROM, floppy disk, magnetic tape,
 			an MS-DOS® partition, or if you have a network
 			connection, you can install it <i>directly</i> over
-			anonymous FTP or NFS. All you need is
+			anonymous FTP or NFS. All you need are
 			<a
 			  href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install.html">these
 			directions</a>.</p>
--- about.sgml.diff ends here ---


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