www/70751: [PATCH] www/en/where.sgml update

[Jesus R.Camou]

>Number:         70751
>Category:       www
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] www/en/where.sgml update
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       medium
>Responsible:    freebsd-www
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          update
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Aug 21 02:20:22 GMT 2004
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Jesus R. Camou
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD nightfall.cox.net 4.10-STABLE FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE #11: Mon Jul 26 20:10:25 MST 2004 root at nightfall.cox.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/NIGHTFALL i386

>Description:

http://www.freebsd.org/where.html contains non-updated data.  The following patch:

	o Reorganizes the first two paragraphs based on how the internal section
	of the web is organized (titles, colors, paragraph wording, etc.)

	o Substitutes -current for -CURRENT and -stable for -STABLE globally.

	o Makes it look much better and confortable to surf on.

>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:

	

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Index: where.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/www/en/where.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.60
diff -u -r1.60 where.sgml
--- where.sgml	25 Sep 2003 10:20:48 -0000	1.60
+++ where.sgml	20 Aug 2004 22:55:26 -0000
@@ -9,26 +9,27 @@
 
     <a name="releases"></a>
     
-    <h2><a href="&base;/releases/index.html">Release Information</a></h2>
-    
-    <p>Detailed descriptions of past, present, and future releases.  Look here
-      first to determine what the latest version of FreeBSD is.</p>
-    
+    <h2><font color="#990000">Release Information</font></h2>
+
+    <p>The <a href="&base;/releases/index.html">release information</a> page
+      provides detailed descpriptions of past, present, and future releases.
+      Look here first to determine what the lastest version of FreeBSD is.</p>
+
     <a name="install"></a>
     
-    <h2><a href="doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install.html">Installing FreeBSD</a></h2>
+    <h2><font color="#990000">Installing FreeBSD</font></h2>
     
-    <p>There are many options for installing FreeBSD, including installation
-      from CDROM, floppy disk, an MS-DOS partition, magnetic tape, anonymous
-      ftp, and NFS.  Please read through the <a
-	href="doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install.html">installation guide</a> before downloading
-      the entire FreeBSD distribution.  If you are installing on a machine
-      connected to the Internet, you may only need to download a single
-      installation disk image!</p>
-
+    <p>There are many options for <a href="doc/en_US.ISO8859/books/handbook/
+      install.html">installing FreeBSD</a>, including installation from CDROM,
+      floppy disk, an MS-DOS partition, magnetic tape, anonymous ftp, and NFS.
+      Please read through the <a href="doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install.html">
+      installation guide</a> before downloading the entire FreeBSD distribution.
+      If you are installing on a machine connected to the Internet, you may only
+      need to download a single installation disk image!</p>
+      
     <a name="distribution"></a>
     
-    <h2>Distribution Sites</h2>
+    <h2><font color="#990000">Distribution Sites</font></h2>
     
     <p>The official sources for FreeBSD are:</p>
       
@@ -66,23 +67,23 @@
 	href="releases/index.html">release information page</a>.</p>
       
     <p>If you're interested in a purely experimental <strong>snapshot</strong>
-      release of FreeBSD-current (AKA &rel.current;-current), aimed at developers and
+      release of FreeBSD-CURRENT (AKA &rel.current;-CURRENT), aimed at developers and
       bleeding-edge testers only, then please see the <a
 	href="ftp://current.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/">daily snapshot
 	server</a> FTP site.</p>
 
     <a name="apps"></a>
     
-    <h2>Applications and Utility Software</h2>
+    <h2><font color="#990000">Applications and Utility Software</font></h2>
     
-    <h3>The Packages collection</h3>
+    <h3><font color="#990000">The Packages collection</font></h3>
     
     <p>The FreeBSD packages collection is a diverse collection of utility and
       application software that has been ported to FreeBSD.  The packages are
       pre-compiled binaries ready to drop into your system and run.</p>
 
     <ul>
-      <li>Packages for FreeBSD-current
+      <li>Packages for FreeBSD-CURRENT
         <ul>
           <li><a
 	      href="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/alpha/packages-current">alpha</a></li>
@@ -95,7 +96,7 @@
           <li><a
 	      href="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/sparc64/packages-current">sparc64</a></li>
         </ul>
-      <li>Packages for FreeBSD-stable
+      <li>Packages for FreeBSD-STABLE
         <ul>
           <li><a
 	      href="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/alpha/packages-stable">alpha</a></li>
@@ -104,7 +105,7 @@
         </ul>
     </ul>
 
-    <h3>The Ports collection</h3>
+    <h3><font color="#990000">The Ports collection</font></h3>
     
     <p>The Ports collection is like the packages collection, but the necessary
       patches and makefiles to compile the source code are provided instead of
@@ -126,7 +127,7 @@
       the article <em><a href="doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/index.html">Contributing to
       FreeBSD</a></em>.</p>
 
-    <h3>Commercial software</h3>
+    <h3><font color="#990000">Commercial software</font></h3>
 
     <p>Beginning with FreeBSD <a href="releases/index.html">Release 2.0.5</a>, FreeBSD
       includes demo versions of some commercial as well as some shareware
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