bce(4) man page updates
Sean Bruno
seanbru at yahoo-inc.com
Thu May 31 17:16:02 UTC 2012
On Thu, 2012-05-31 at 05:46 -0700, Warren Block wrote:
> On Wed, 30 May 2012, Sean Bruno wrote:
>
> > Was trolling around inside of bce(4) and the Broadcom docs today and
> > made the following update to the man page. Thoughts?
> >
> > Sean
> >
> > http://people.freebsd.org/~sbruno/bce_man.txt
>
> Nice!
>
> Just minor suggestions.
>
> The two "whether or not" sentences ought to be just "Enable/Disable ..."
> like the rest.
>
> A couple of "Cannot be assigned the value 0" sentences can be simpler as
> "Cannot be set to 0" if that doesn't change the meaning.
>
> "Valid values are in the range from 0-256." can be simpler as
> "Values from 0-256 are valid."
>
> Many "The default value is" which could be simplified to "The default
> is", or added to the end of a previous sentence as an aside:
> "Values from 0-100 are valid (default 18)."
Indeed. Much more gooder wordingness. Updated!
http://people.freebsd.org/~sbruno/bce_man.txt
Sean
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